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Paul Losonso

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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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Sep 04, 2025

It was nice to see Vito and Iris helping out the innkeeper. The break from the main quest was a good addition 👍

Omertà: Building the Mafia in Another World

Chapter:18

Sep 04, 2025

That twist at the end with Skotto's real motive was great. It makes the chapter title "Dark Motives" hit differently 👍

Singularity : The Arrival

Chapter:9

Sep 04, 2025

Elara is already proving to be a great leader, handling so many things at once
I wonder how will she convinces other bases.👍

Oops, we're immortal

Chapter:18

Sep 02, 2025

You've said you're not good at writing afterwords, yet you managed to write a very nice one!"

Maybe it had something to do with starting by first thanking your Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ...

Yup, that's definitely it!

Turn-Based Combat

Chapter:39

Sep 02, 2025

The chapter has a strong pace. The quick transition from the college scene to the bullying incident worked well to keep the story moving and builds good momentum 👍

The time when Isakai comes to your world.

Chapter:22

Sep 02, 2025

This sounds so charming and funny! I love the unique blend of a fantasy adventure and a simple cafe. 👍

Dungeon Cafe! Serving Coffee & the Quest!

Chapter:12

Sep 02, 2025

I really enjoyed the emotional depth of this chapter and the unexpected twist at the end. The reveal of Gideon's true intentions was a powerful moment that reframed the entire journey. It's a very compelling read. 👍

Time and Time Again

Chapter:27

Sep 01, 2025

The writing style is engaging, and the way the plot unfolds is handled well. I found the concept of the protagonist balancing his two likes compelling 👍

My Renaissance

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

Author’s Note (September 1st, 2025):
Hello, everyone! Just a quick heads-up: this chapter (and the one before it) has been almost completely reworked. I’ve woven in a parallel storyline that runs alongside the main thread, so both the title and the core content are different now. If you’ve read the earlier version, I recommend giving it another read to catch all the changes.

Cheers!

The Common Ground

Chapter:13

Sep 01, 2025

Author’s Note (September 1st, 2025):
Hello, everyone! Just a quick heads-up: this chapter (and the next one) has been almost completely reworked. I’ve woven in a parallel storyline that runs alongside the main thread, so both the title and the core content are different now. If you’ve read the earlier version, I recommend giving it another read to catch all the changes.

Cheers!

The Common Ground

Chapter:12

Aug 27, 2025

The chapter effectively builds tension through the conversation between Yuna and the disembodied voice before introducing Shin 👍

Ashes of the Chosen: Volume 1

Chapter:28

Aug 27, 2025

This is to let everyone know that I've finally decided to change the title of my work-in-progress to "The Common Ground"!

(Not sure how to change the cover image too though...)

The Common Ground

Chapter:1

Aug 24, 2025

I'm curious to see what happens next now that Sisli has revealed her identity. The boss room sounds intense. 👍

How the wicked witch became the hero's sidekick

Chapter:17

Aug 24, 2025

It's a nice detail that the protagonist is trying to place the timeline of this world. I found it interesting 👍

Reincarnated into My Favorite Game, But I Forgot Everything I Knew About It

Chapter:20

Aug 24, 2025

Text: "How could Cirus simply forget a crucial part of their journey back to Tor Alian?..."
Me: He's obviously hiding something!
Text: "...It was obvious he was concealing something[...]"
Me: There you go! XD

P.S. The journey by river seems like a fitting change of pace for the characters. 👍

The Sapphire Legacy

Chapter:37

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