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Paul Losonso

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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

I'm glad you think so! 😊
You know, all three “The Last Watch” chapters were originally meant to be just one long one.
I just… tried to keep within the 1,000–1,500 word suggestion, since I thought it was mandatory back then.

The Common Ground

Chapter:17

Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Yeah. They were all brave – they’d accepted their fate.
They had to.
For the Tarlmerefolk 🫡

The Common Ground

Chapter:18

Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

I just hope I explained it all well enough – those are important details about life on the common ground 🤓

The Common Ground

Chapter:20

Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Yes! It was meant to be tragic...
As well as the song the bard (and all) sang before the fall.

I'm glad the eye colours element resonated with you 😊👍

The Common Ground

Chapter:19

Oct 14, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Exactly! They didn't.
And -I believe- they were masters of the see mainly because they had conquered all the land around it ⚔️
But, this is a whole new world... so, new chapter for them too! ⛵

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:22

Oct 14, 2025

Nice world building on the previous chapter... and on this one the point of view has changed and "we" are the explorers!
I always love some "Master and Commander", regardless the era... and right now we've been hooked/ "tricked" to turn the page right away real nicely!

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:22

Oct 14, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Hahaha – while writing about Tarlmere again and again I also realized the similarity to Tamriel... but, I had advanced quite a bit by then and actually never changed it (still).

I'm so glad you liked the campfire scene, by the way. It's also one of my favourite "moments"!
I actually wanted to upload a snowy one, but it was hard to make.

The Common Ground

Chapter:15

Oct 14, 2025

To:Mai

I'm so glad you think so! I've been investing a lot of gray matter into the descriptions, so that's wonderful to hear 😊

And thank you for mentioning the dividers! I was actually worried I might be using them too often, so your comment is a huge relief 😮‍💨

The Common Ground

Chapter:12

Oct 13, 2025

I'm now intrigued about those Blue Conch Tribes 😲
...as well as the Atlantians (as I call in my head those sea-living peoples)

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:21

Oct 13, 2025

Wow, it's only chapter three and it's already chaos! Seems the whole building will collapse!
The lead up was nice 👍🏻

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:3

Oct 13, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Yeah, actually... I needed a comment about this!
I gave the chapter this name after I'd finish it (obviously) and it made total sense to me... but, was worried that using the very last sentence might actually be weird for the reader 😬
So, it strikes well in the end, right?

The Common Ground

Chapter:14

Oct 13, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

I'm glad you think so! 😊
Him being an architect was my inspiration to all this!
And yes, shades come in many types and forms... Not all become the same.

The Common Ground

Chapter:13

Oct 13, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Hahaha - Yeah! The outhouse scene is precious 😁

And yes, concerning the shades, that's how I wanted to present it.
And I wanted to expand on that a bit more given time ✍️

The Common Ground

Chapter:12

Oct 13, 2025

To:Paul Losonso

The Common Ground

Chapter:11

Oct 13, 2025

So... well written!
Well done 👍

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