Aug 10, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

Hiro's reaction was probably still one of the best foreshadowing I've done even to this date. Various things are going to go down and I hope that you'd enjoy it!

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Aug 07, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

This and the previous chapter really was hard to write because of all the conceptualization I had to make, and partly because of counting the days manually for the initial manuscript (lol). In the end, Gin giving up on counting the days was a reflection to me!
Next chapters will be a bit pacified, and story points will progress slower. Or should I say casual chapters!
But once again thank you for your feedback!

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Aug 03, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

I may hinted in the next chapter teaser from chapter 7 that this is another heavy reference from Dragon Ball Z while applying what the so little physics I learned from high school (lol).
Bur indeed, chapter 9 is something to watch out (but perhaps not the entirety of it). In any case, it's always nice to see your insights and interpretation of what is going on, but feel free to leave criticisms if you have any!

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Jul 31, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

Your interpretation of this chapter is so great. This aren't tears okay? I'm only yawning

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Jul 29, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

The plot thickens as they say. But nope, Gin wasn't transported to a fantasy world. That's for another day! *winks*

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Jul 29, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

I'm very sorry about spoiling you! I had to keep the structure of these chapters to remind me of how I have improved as a writer, and I kind of expected this to happen. But seriously, this is the very first time that I am getting feedback after all those years and I greatly appreciated that!

Still, I am very sorry for that, but I actually haven't watched the anime anyway. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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Jul 29, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

Expect more times where the fourth wall will absolutely be obliterated for comedic purposes!

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Jul 29, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

Honestly… 2017 me may have blatantly inspired that question to that in Rewrite as I have briefly watched the anime at that time. But about the things about art, it is my way to reflect my great interest with art as I draw more than I write, thus, the club was born. Still, this chapter is one of the instances where my cringe kicks in, even if it was just me thinking that.

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Jul 29, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

I have always committed to be transparent in this chapter—I have underdeveloped the amplification so much in the following chapters, as it is very hard to conceptualize. It is something that I have neglected for so long, but it will be given closure "someday"!

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Jul 29, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

Honestly, I haven't gone that far on developing my setting in the process of writing this like, two or so years ago. But you may notice that I have a great love with foreshadowing, which will be here and there. Anyway, I appreciate the feedback!

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Jul 28, 2020

To:Ana Fowl

Greatly appreciated! I indeed said that but I can at least say that there is whooole lot that is coming. And less cringe, probably!
(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)

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Jul 16, 2020

Haru: s u m i m a s e n ?

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Jul 16, 2020

I guess no Za Warudo for us 😏

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