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dmznot

Hiiii! ⋆｡°✩⋆｡°✩⋆｡°✩⋆｡°✩

I'm a guy, btw.
I love parody and anything that sounds funny. But being ghosted isn't one of them.
Just kidding, lmao.

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Aug 25, 2022

"a city girl thing?" Yes.
"my fingers were crushed" I like this unexpected moment.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:12

Aug 25, 2022

"holding Sereya's hand the entire time!" Ehe!
"feel it pressing" Ehehe!
"with me tonight, I don't care anymore!" NANI KORE?! I'm gonna ASDF@#$ if the next chapter is waking up in the morning without pro-proper clothes, and a proper explanation about the night. Well, probably Sereya got a fever or something. Yes, yes, likely.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:11

Aug 24, 2022

"both eyes shimmering with different colours" Man, this is so chuuni!
"My eyes are the results of Augmentation" I knew it, chuuni!

Oh, I love the raining stone bullets scene. I was immersed in the story, and that scene was nice to see in my head.
"hopefully not from the bar earlier" I guess it was, Evan, lol.

Okay, this fight was wrapped so cool, very cool due to the trick, so I doubled the hearts if possible. And then there were the tears or emotional moment. Oh, what a craft.
If I were here last year, then I'd vote for you because of this chapter. I was really impressed by this chapter. So yeah, Vol. 3 for sweetness, Vol. 1 for action.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:10

Aug 24, 2022

Yes, she is sly, lol.
"blue eye ignited" Alright, she is a chuuni.
"ominous yellow" the power of chuuni! Oh, it was cool when it happened, unexpected and cool, and then there was the cliffhanger. This scene changed the thumbs into hearts.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:9

Aug 24, 2022

lol, it was funny when Sereya stole Evan's fish, and it was unexpected she stole again and then ordered for Evan. I like it.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:8

Aug 24, 2022

Alright, the last line was surprising, lol.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:7

Aug 24, 2022

"leaving it parked in the middle" lol. That was unexpected, I thought it got attacked.
"meant that that" I guess last year's contest was so chaotic (tight schedule), or this was intentional, and it's just a small thing anyway.
"That idiot tossed me into the sky!" I love this scene, it was unexpected and funny.

Okay, Vol. 1 hits different from Vol. 3 so far. Vol. 3 is chilling and sweet.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:6

Aug 22, 2022

“this soft and slightly moist sensation” …?????! A. Thighs, B. B-boobs, C. Chu! D. Feet?!!
I was sleepy (2 AM), and it made me read the previous lines again ("Oh, it was chu, my brain didn't work properly again!! Sorry!!"). Then her reaction was unpredictable (she buried her face), thus it was fun.

“the person you love…is Hanasuke, right?” Yes! I’m looking for that answer. GIMME. Well, no spoiler please, let's just continue when I awake. I'm done with my entry, thus I have more time to read, YEEHAW.
Oh, what's going to happen to Melye also makes me curious, because she is gone in Vol. 3.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:5

Aug 21, 2022

Alright, I have read and edited all chapters. Now I hope I didn't make any silly mistakes, lol.

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Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:30

Aug 19, 2022

Okay, this isn’t an open ending, right?

I finally reach the end, DESUWAAA! I’m glad I can reach the ending that I envisioned. Thank you for your encouragement, Tomo!

To this novel readers, thank you for checking out this novel. Thank you for your comments and feedback. Those comments motivated me to write (the likes too!), answered my curiosity (e.g. “Are the jokes working?”), and also hinted me to revise this novel (I hope I revised it well).

Is this novel open to expansion? Yes. I haven’t explored other nations or the World Organization. I might introduce a new protagonist, and of course, there will be other rebellions and cyborgs with their unique abilities (this is related to the prompt after all). But for now, “Real Villain, Desu Wa!” ends here. Damian Ford and his random behaviors are no more.

Thanks for the opportunity! I had fun with the contest, and I hope you enjoyed this novel!

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Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:30

Aug 19, 2022

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Ah, I see. It's similar to Haruhi!

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Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:29

Aug 19, 2022

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Yes, that one!
Oh, so Bunny Girl has a repeating summer too.

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Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:29

Aug 19, 2022

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Oh I didn't watch Rascal, so I don't know what is the reference.
But I had watched Haruhi Suzumiya, so when I wrote "time machine", sometimes Mikuru's TPDD popped into my mind, lol.

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Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:29

Aug 18, 2022

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Yes, it was!

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Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:28

Aug 18, 2022

SHINKAAAAAAAAAAA!

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Real Villain, Desu Wa!

Chapter:28