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Jul 09, 2026

To:Kitsune

Poor guy doesn't even know he's a hero 😭

Everyone Remembers the Hero Except Me

Chapter:3

Jul 09, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

As a wise old man once said:

"You almost had ME?! You never had me. You never even had your sword!"

Of Sun and Sand

Chapter:1

Jul 09, 2026

The hero is back! This is not a drill!

Everyone Remembers the Hero Except Me

Chapter:3

Jul 09, 2026

Dang, they already want to split the girls apart. Not cool.

Guardian of Wind

Chapter:1

Jul 08, 2026

To:Pope Evaristus

You got Drake "Drake Maye" Maye on your team lol you'll probably be back next year

Brilliant Battle First Corinthians

Chapter:5

Jul 07, 2026

Right on schedule, the big reveal! Now, WHAT is he doing in prison?!

Everyone Remembers the Hero Except Me

Chapter:2

Jul 06, 2026

To:Kitsune

I meant what I said lol

But also, now I gotta wonder what our boy Felix did to get himself in this predicament

Everyone Remembers the Hero Except Me

Chapter:0

Jul 06, 2026

Good anime (will provide a better response when I get off work lol)

Everyone Remembers the Hero Except Me

Chapter:0

Jul 03, 2026

Did... did he just try to pull off a training montage?! That is 1000% training montage music!

Brilliant Battle First Corinthians

Chapter:6

Jul 03, 2026

Bro witnessed the Butt Fumble, the wasted talents of Geno Smith, Sam Darnold, Joe Flacco, and Aaron Rodgers, and many many defensive players, and boldly declared, facing the wind,

"I AM a Jets fan!"

Brilliant Battle First Corinthians

Chapter:5

Jul 02, 2026

Don't forget to keep an eye out for your choice of tense. It's definitely mostly past tense, but sometimes it accidentally slips into present tense. Choosing one will help keep your story consistent prose-wise.

Keep up the good work.

An adventurer?

Chapter:2

Jul 02, 2026

Also agreeing with Sabella, it does sound like you have a very interesting concept and one that you should definitely keep working on.

An adventurer?

Chapter:1

Jul 02, 2026

I agree with Sabella on the unusual usage of periods. Many of the periods used in the middle of your paragraphs would be much better as commas, letting you chain together your character's thoughts into complete sentences rather than partial ones.

Case in point, for example, when you describe the healer girl's battle attire. I'd swap out some of those periods for commas.

I'd write it as (again, as an example):
"After forcing my way through the crowd and towards the waiting area, confusion immediately struck me as soon as I got there. It was her, the girl from yesterday, but in hiking boots, a long skirt, and a thick coat with pockets and pouches. More disturbing than her *I committed a crime and gotta skip town* outfit was that the inhumane business smile was gone and done over with a tired glare and dark circles under her pretty eyes."

An adventurer?

Chapter:1

Jul 02, 2026

Honestly, I don't have much to say that hasn't already been said in the comments. (I look at the comments before giving my thoughts to make sure I'm just not beating a dead horse.) You have an interesting concept, and you should definitely keep working on it. I do wish the Varkonians could feel more like a threat. They conquered the entire world and obviously they defeated him once before (hence the cryo chamber), but they got dispatched way too easily. You had a pretty good setup for a massive brawl at the jail, but then the whole thing kinda just... ends? Overall, I like what you got going so far.

Blaze Borne

Chapter:1

Jun 24, 2026

To:Gurg

No worries!

One for Sorrow

Chapter:1

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