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Exophonic writer living in Tokyo. Writes and enjoys: Urban Fantasy / Historical Fiction / NSFW / Music / Drama / Slice of Life
Would love to exchange honest feedback!
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Nov 26, 2025
To:Prufrock
Ahh thank you so much for reading! <3 And I am so happy with this comment because that is definitely what I'm trying to convey here; that the supernatural exists, right under people's noses, brushing past us at many moments of the day and we don't even realize! I'm hoping to bring some action into the story too but I am so happy you are enjoying the subtle whimsical vibe <3
So glad you like it, friend!
Nov 25, 2025
Kasane quickly became the main character 🤣
Nov 24, 2025
Okay, I admit I misjudged Kasane; she’s actually a total bad-ass XD
Love it when stupid men are put in their place lol *glares at Kazuya*
Nov 23, 2025
CRY REACT CUZ AAAAAAA 😭 he’s such a gentleman but HNNGGGG JUST DO IT
Beautiful scenery of the onsen and mountains! Just noticed a few things in the first paragraphs: “shined” instead of “shone”, and Jun’s bathing part starts with him slipping into the bath but then the next paragraph says he cleansed himself :)
Still hoping for a development next chapter >w<
To:kcayu
Awww thank you for reading <3 I’m glad you think so 🥹 at least they have been finding comfort with each other for the past year… but that might all be about to change…
Second mention of Hoshino’s dingdong, and now a maid outfit
My anticipation level for the rest of this novel is off the charts
“and someone murdered all the beavers”
W H E E Z E
Good cliches are tropes for a reason XD
I’m glad to hear that <3 I hope you will also read my new updates, I’m so slow recently 😭
Nov 22, 2025
*buries face in this chapter like it’s catnip* MMMMMMM
It’s so cute. Just so cute. A lot of familiar tropes but that’s okay because it works perfectly for them <3 and the romance is developing so swiftly here but still not too rushed, leaving me pining for every new chapter aaaaa
Well done.
Nov 21, 2025
Really enjoying more of these humorous and creative sentences while keeping the horrors vivid and engaging.
Nov 20, 2025
Michi cracks me up XDDDD
And ohhh THE MUTUAL PINING <3 HNNNGGGGGG
This is such a welcome and entertaining break among all the action, but also a false sense of safety…? I’m sure the yakuza aren’t done with them yet…
ITS OK THO FIRST WE NEED SOME STEAMY ROMANCE
Steamy because onsen, obviously
Nov 19, 2025
I love it when you can describe both a backstory and a current situation in the same scene and have it all flow together! I noticed this in My Salaryman Familiar too! My friend, you are such a great writer 🥹
Congrats again on becoming a finalist!! I’m excited to get to know Sayane, but I can already tell you wrote another extremely relatable character I will be rooting for!
I’ve never been so much into a horror novel as this one. Amazing writing.