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Jul 29, 2021

To:Kino

Thank you for your kind comment.

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:3

Jul 29, 2021

To:Kino

Thank you for your kind comment.

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2021

To:AnotherTiredPerson

Thank you for your kind comment. My intention is for the title to play a role in the chapter, as well as be an indicator via the language of flowers or hanakotoba, being specific.

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2021

To:Gurg

Thank you so much!

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2021

To:Gurg

Haha, made my day. Thank you for your comments.

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2021

To:kazesenken

Thank you for your kind comment. Kanro's and Hakuro's dad is a special case, and I will write more of him in the future. Glad he was accepted since his character is very shady and not acceptable for some due to the foreshadowings.

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2021

To:Gurg

Now I wonder if Hakuro or Mima. Who is still #1? I wonder.

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2021

To:Gurg

Thank you, things next chapter makes the gears go out of control.

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:2

Jul 21, 2021

To:kazesenken

When you are used to author teasing, you learn to embrace it. You did it quite well

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:8

Jul 21, 2021

To:Gurg

Cinnamon flavored muffin?

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:2

Jul 21, 2021

I gave it a read and it's not bad. I enjoyed the pacing and the last dialogue makes me wonder what will happen next. I will add this to my library to keep on reading it.

The Life of Death

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2021

The first dialogue caught me off guard and I thought the story was not going to be serious. I quite enjoyed the chapter itself but I felt the excessive cursing and attempts to be funny were too forced. When writing comedy, I suggest letting it go free, don't think too much about it.

That Time I Died

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2021

Maribel is quite the lucky girl to have Snazzy by his side this time. The pun of the name of the inn was nice too. I'm glad things turned out for the best in the end.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:10

Jul 21, 2021

Snazzy might be quite a Jellyfish of culture, but I see he is not into the glory of armpit degeneracy. I liked when you wrote about Maribell's past teammates.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:9

Jul 21, 2021

The start was a dead give-away it was a massage. Still, quite well executed and written. The ending was quite a drastic turn as well.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:8

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