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Dec 24, 2021

To:Bubbles

Thank you very much for your kind, insightful comment. It is the first time I go for descriptive writing, I will apply what you have said for the next one. Esther is a young-looking girl. Everything happens continuously except for some flashbacks Maitreya has in italics. I appreciate the insightful comment and will apply this feedback for the next chapter.

Flower of Eden: Withered Blossoms

Chapter:1

Dec 21, 2021

To:ACHIEVE

I appreciate your kind words!

Flower of Eden: Withered Blossoms

Chapter:1

Dec 21, 2021

To:ACHIEVE

Thank you for your kind words. I am no poet but thank you regardless.

Flower of Eden: Withered Blossoms

Chapter:0

Dec 20, 2021

Quite a cliffhanger.

It’s a long road to Los Angeles

Chapter:1

Dec 20, 2021

Very nice! I felt compelled while reading it. For a once-shot, it evokes many emotions.

A Flower for You

Chapter:1

Dec 20, 2021

I deeply enjoyed this prologue. It seems the story is in a fantasy setting, and the present characters have already strong personalities. I feel bad for the little vampire girl, and I wonder as well about their lifestyle before she became sick.

Silent Night

Chapter:0

Dec 13, 2021

To:otkrlj

I appreciate those kind words!

Flower of Eden: Withered Blossoms

Chapter:0

Dec 13, 2021

To:Itsuka

Thank you very much for your kind words!

Flower of Eden: Withered Blossoms

Chapter:0

Dec 13, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thank you very much for your kind words, very much appreciated.

Flower of Eden: Withered Blossoms

Chapter:0

Dec 13, 2021

To:Ah Rin

Thank you for your kind comment.

When My Ex-Girlfriend Came For a Visit, It Was Raining.

Chapter:1

Dec 13, 2021

Resonating with a piece of writing is absolutely fascinating to me. While reading this, a hurricane of emotions overwhelmed me as each line became deeper with hidden messages and an estranged relationship between Nicholas and his environment. If this novel turns out to be a collection of "dark" Christmas memoirs, it would be fantastic.

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

Chapter:1

Aug 22, 2021

I love Yuri and her chaotic energy.

Being a Girl Online Made Me Become a Girl in Real Life

Chapter:9

Aug 22, 2021

I am eagerly waiting how to see this first date happens.

Being a Girl Online Made Me Become a Girl in Real Life

Chapter:8

Aug 22, 2021

The action scene was grappling. I'm glad Lord George pulled through too.

Zero.

Chapter:15

Aug 22, 2021

Uncle, Enteng, George... this was wild.

Zero.

Chapter:14

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