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Just your typical anime-brained would-be novelist. I go by Tevish Szat most places on the internet but don't really social media much. I also review anime via my own blog, harperanimereviews.com
What is an Achievement?
Troubled, but messed up enough to sell itself
Feb 10, 2026
So, You folks struggled with the prompt, and I feel like you didn't quite get what you were passed. You went a delightfully disturbed place, but it's not the assignment. In terms of horror, thoug...
Not my cup of horror-tea
The writing here was technically solid, but it's clear that there was a deep struggle with the genre, this being more of a romantic drama's third act wrapped up in some almost-parodical horror wrap...
Works
This one is a solid evocation of its type of horror. The ending... is what it is, and as a whole there's a great deal of ambiguity in the story in general that usually works in its favor.
The c...
Phantasmagorical
The first chapter, with its airborne environment, was a hard act to follow. Part of me did get distracted by the conceit that a hot air balloon (which has no lateral propulsion) is being used to r...
A bit scattered
Having a separate protagonist for each chapter, I feel, ended up working against the story as a whole, at least when viewed against the field of the competition. The chunin exam is a harsh field t...
Solid
This feels like a Twilight Zone episode, which is a good place to be in. I like that it's unclear whether spooky stuff is actually happening or if it's mostly in the main character's head, due to ...
Classical Touch
This is an excellent evocation of the assignment, utilizing both your prompt and your must-include in order to produce something with a distinct appeal to the classics. It's not "a take on Franken...
Excellent Take
As part of the team that pitched you folks the main prompt, I have to say I'm impressed with where you took it.
Put plainly, when we shipped that prompt over, what I expected was something in ...
Conflicted
I love the scifi in this. Both the idea of an embryonic seed ship and the ice shield that frames the opening action remind me of Songs of Distant Earth, which is a good place to be pulling from. ...
An excellent response to the prompt.
The setting sometimes feels confused, like this should have been just a period piece but it has some modern references there too, but that's a minor blemish. On the whole, I was often reminded of ...