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registered at: Dec 20, 2025

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aaa

Jan 01, 2026

Finally Alishia is in this new world full of fantasy and magic!
But what will await her here and why did Kain bring her to this world somehow connected with her mother?
What do you think? Let me know in the comments :3

Alishia

Chapter:6

Jan 01, 2026

Cool :D

The Night Beneath The Shrines: When the Invisible Becomes Unstoppable

Chapter:7

Jan 01, 2026

Really cool :)

Under the Seal of Repudiation

Chapter:2

Jan 01, 2026

To:theACE

Thank you so much!!

Kijin: Neo Haikyo JAPON

Chapter:0

Dec 31, 2025

Really cool chapter :D

Hunt's Cabin

Chapter:10

Dec 31, 2025

You described this very well and I really enticed Thai chapter :)
But I would recommend writing more because at the beginning I really was excited to continue but this chapter was really short maybe write it longer about 1000-1500 words and add a few things of the boy :)

“The Days I Pretended Not to Matter”

Chapter:1

Dec 31, 2025

To:theACE

Thank youuuuu :)

Alishia

Chapter:0

Dec 31, 2025

To:theACE

Thank you so much really glade you like it :)

Alishia

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

It is a really cool introducion keep it up :)

Qanoq Ippit, Amarok? (How Are You, Wolf?)

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

To:Polly_Iris

Thank your for reading my chapter!
This is exactly what my book does ,even if it's brutal, it shows the harsch realitly of some children and what they have to endure :(
I hope you will also like my other chapters, if you want to contiune reading them💝

Alishia

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

I liked reading this chapter very much the conversations are very well written and I love the vibe :)
But I recommend describing emotions more so the reader truly can live with this book and feel the tension and feelings the characters feel and make the surrounding maybe a bit more detailed and longer sentences :)
But I really enjoyed it, good job!! :D

Twist

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

I clicked this story because the cover really interested me it’s a great one !
The story is also cool but I would add more though and make the sentences longer at the beginning you can’t really see who the main character is and describe the panic more and also feelings :)
It felt a bit written without feelings but still the concept is very cool and keep working 💖

Demon Fire Orphan

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

Your story telling is really cool but maybe you could add more conversation but still really cool :)

Oathbound: Bound by Blood, Tested by Betrayal

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

I really like this story :)
Tho I would recommend describing the surrounding a bit more ❤️

Dispositions

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

I really like this story :)

Under the Seal of Repudiation

Chapter:1

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