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Jan 03, 2026
To: Epti
Yeah I get it maybe it’s because I usually read longer stories and also write longer ones haha
Really like it but just for my taste maybe at the beginnen the way you describe builds to much tension, for me it makes the whole book from beginning to end filled with tension and then there is no wow effect you know what I mean 🥲 But still it’s a cool writing style
I liked the chapter but I recommend writing it longer and to do longer sentences :) Still very cool :D
I really like the characters and the writing style :) Very cool chapter
This was really interesting I like your writing style :) But there was a really long part I would put some pharagraphes in :) But really good work 🩷
Really interesting chapter!!❤️
The cover is insanely good and the chapter is also really cool :D
Underrated book! Love the cover so much and the writing is also good :)
Liked the chapter I would recommend adding a few paragraphs breaks :)
Really cool 👍
Also really cool :D
Jan 02, 2026
To:Bubbly_bubble
Thank you so much !!! I really appreciate it and next chapter will even be more about the demons and the magic land Alishia is in now :)
I hope you enjoyed this chapter :D What decision will Alishia make in the next one and who else will she meet? What do you think let me know in the comments :)
Very cool chapter :D
Jan 01, 2026
I feel so bad for him :(