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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Apr 06, 2024

To:Momentie

Ah I see what you mean.

Erika's an exception. They don't allow hoshinauts that old normally.

Also, that should have been "more than ten years". Erika's actually way older than 26. That was a typo on my part. Thanks for catching that.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:4

Apr 06, 2024

To:Momentie

At this point in the story, Erika's real age and identity is a mystery. The other characters have hinted that they have a theory about who she is, but they haven't let the reader in on the secret.

But in officially, at eighteen, Sachiko is the oldest hoshinaut sent to space. They don't send adults. Erika is claiming to the public to be sixteen.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:4

Apr 05, 2024

Nice references. This is definitely some weeb fiction.

The Society for the Study of Otherworldly Visual Culture

Chapter:3

Apr 04, 2024

Cat!

The Society for the Study of Otherworldly Visual Culture

Chapter:1

Apr 04, 2024

To:Deleted User

Great analogy. It's *exactly* like that.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:2

Mar 28, 2024

To:Kirb

Thus the need to take Neo Tanegashima under her control. Even if the streaming services cut her off, they could still broadcast to the world.

But the streaming services probably didn't have their finger hovering over the ban button. It looked like a government-sanctioned commercial from their POV.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:17

Mar 27, 2024

tfw your crush tries to cripple you.

My Dad is an Otaku, My Mom is a Fujoshi, and I Wish I Was Dead

Chapter:82

Mar 25, 2024

To:Kirb

I think it's safe to say that, Erika, Hina, and Yasu would agree with you there. Up to this point, I hope I conveyed that Sachiko's the only one who enjoys spending time with Maeko.

She's got no compunctions manipulating Hina and Yasu for her own goals, because she has no emotions. Even if she did, she knows they would do the same to her, if they had as clear an idea of what their goals were.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:16

Mar 25, 2024

To:Kirb

Thank you! Although to be honest, the number of views is deceptively high. Yeah, it says 21.4k on the front, but that's mostly the table of contents/summary page getting loaded. If you add up all the chapter views, it's 2,481.

Which is still great! I'm glad multiple people have enjoyed it. I really only started this to practice and experiment with writing prose that flows better, and I don't think I actually improved much until the end.

That said, I've been trying to figure out why the summary page keeps getting so many hits so I can put a stop to it and give up my place on the front page to stories that are getting more actual reads.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:14

Mar 24, 2024

OK, yeah, this was definitely spicier than usual. I can see why you mentioned you considered it perverted in Discord. All things considered though, I think it's pretty in-line with the type of scene you'd see in an anime like this.

Definitely inviting some "drill that will pierce the heavens" jokes though.

My Dad is an Otaku, My Mom is a Fujoshi, and I Wish I Was Dead

Chapter:81

Mar 24, 2024

To:Kirb

She does, and she's going to realize that in the next chapter.

But by this point, I hope I've successfully communicated that she thinks herself better than other people. And part of that is because she's never experienced how difficult it can be to control those kinds of feelings. She was never attracted to other biological humans, and she didn't recognize her attraction to gynoids for what it was. So in her mind, all those difficult feelings that teenagers contend with aren't all that strong, and those who give into them are weak.

She's now learning how strong those kinds of feelings can really be, and that she's not as strong as she thought she was.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:12

Mar 24, 2024

To:Kirb

Whether they love it or hate it, most of my readers commented on that line. One of those moments as a writer where I felt I did something right.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:10

Mar 15, 2024

You know it's fiction because it's about a small business about to make a large profit in this economy.

My Dad is an Otaku, My Mom is a Fujoshi, and I Wish I Was Dead

Chapter:78

Mar 08, 2024

Nice job getting a chapter out for IWD. I didn't even consider doing anything myself, and then you mentioned it in, and I thought, "Dang, that's a great idea. Wish I'd thought of it."

(Not Exactly) In Search Of An Oasis

Chapter:6

Feb 26, 2024

That’s an interesting setup for the sword.

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:2

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