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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

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Jan 24, 2026

Kitty!

Congrats on finishing! Best of luck with the judging.

Shattering Stardust

Chapter:19

Jan 24, 2026

To:Kirb

At least two instances of foreshadowing, by my count. Three if you count earlier in this chapter.

Shattering Stardust

Chapter:16

Jan 24, 2026

Mittens 😭

Shattering Stardust

Chapter:12

Jan 23, 2026

I get like that all the time. Did I lock the door. Is the stove turned off? The oven? The heater? The sink? Do I have my keys with me?

And I’ve never been hounded by paparazzi.

Shattering Stardust

Chapter:5

Jan 23, 2026

Looks like a lot of people already left long comments, so I won’t do that. I’ll just say that this story made me feel strong emotions, and most romance stories on this site don’t do that. So good job.

Congrats on finishing. Congrats on being the final SR entry before the deadline. I know you value that for some reason. Good luck with judging.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:34

Jan 21, 2026

Come to think of it, does anyone else in this story even know that Kerochanfan exists?

…

I just realized, it’s Kerochan’s alt, isn’t it?

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:31

Jan 20, 2026

This chapter triggered my old man sentimentality. I’m sitting on the bus on the way to work trying not to cry in public.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:25

Jan 19, 2026

Isopods are pretty great though.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:21

Jan 19, 2026

To:J.P. Bargo

Thank you!

Dungeon Track and Field

Chapter:1

Jan 19, 2026

Hey, sorry this isn't a comment on the story, but there's a contest rule that all entries need to have art credits for the cover. (There's more details on the rules page.) Just wanted to give you a heads up since I like what I've read so far, and it'd be a shame if it was DQ'd over a cover of all things.

Stars Apart

Chapter:1

Jan 19, 2026

To:Slow

Thank you! And thank you for reading!

Dungeon Track and Field

Chapter:20

Jan 17, 2026

You could credulously accuse Koharu of being many things, but she’s definitely not a bottom.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:16

Jan 16, 2026

I hate taking my meds too.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:13

Jan 16, 2026

I was so happy for him that he was going to enjoy hot pot. 😭

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:11

Jan 13, 2026

Hey all, if the passage about Robolina's robe seemed to come out of nowhere for you, that's because I previously posted the wrong draft of chapter 9. During the scene where it reveals everyone's running outfits on the second day, it was missing the following paragraph:

Robolina took the cake though. Her deep blue robe with white trim could hardly be called a robe at all. It was more like two strips of cloth that left her arms and legs completely exposed. I suppose it would allow her to absorb more mana during a race, but it bordered on indecent.

Dungeon Track and Field

Chapter:18

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