Steward McOy

Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021
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    Jun 11, 2022

    To:Deleted User

    Thank you for the encouragement!

    (And I apologize it took me so long to reply. I thought the reply button was broken on my story, but I didn't realize you have to reply from the chapter, not the overall story.)

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    The Cat-Eared Historian Mage on the Crumbling Planet cover
    The Cat-Eared Historian Mage on the Crumbling Planet
    Chapter:1

    Jun 11, 2022

    The action in these chapters is written very well. There's a great mix between tension building, dialogue between the characters, and the fighting. Impressive that you kept it going across three chapters.

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    Faustic
    Chapter:3