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Jul 16, 2021

To:August

Thanks a ton for the comment. I felt that this chapter was the best of the bunch, and im glad you agree! Hope you're looking forward to what comes next.

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:5

Jul 11, 2021

To:Ezer Harden

Thanks for reading! I appreciate your time.

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:1

Jul 11, 2021

To:Shulox

Thanks. Hope you enjoy it.

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:0

Jul 11, 2021

To:Bubbles

Thanks a ton for the review! I think I can make a few imprpvements with it. Thanks for reading my work

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:0

Jul 10, 2021

Great chapter! Like the focus on hard work vs talent that gets brought up.

Chapter:5

Jul 09, 2021

To:srj5

Is he wrong though!?

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:2

Jul 08, 2021

This was a ride. Some of these jokes are so left fields that I couldn't stop laughing. I'm looking forward to reading more.

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Chapter:5

Jul 07, 2021

To:agjjball

Thanks. Hope you enjoyed it.

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:0

Jul 07, 2021

To:DanaE

It's already out

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:0

Jul 07, 2021

Liked this so far. I can't wait to read more. Like DIdi said, the formatings a bit wack, but other than that it looks exciting. I also really liked all your descriptions as they help create a really good mental image. Can't wait to see what you have in store.

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Jul 07, 2021

To:srj5

Hope I can deliver

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:1

Jul 07, 2021

To:srj5

Thanks! I hope you will like what's coming up.

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:0

Jul 06, 2021

Great job! I'm a sucker for anything basketball related, and this fits that perfectly. Really good writing too.

Chapter:0

Jul 06, 2021

To:August

Thanks for reading. Ill hope you won't be disappointed. Have some things planned for this.

The Swordmaster and the New God

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