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OscarHM

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Jul 18, 2021

To:Aero

It was an emotional moment for all involved

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:3

Jul 17, 2021

To:shaneghoul

😩

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:0

Jul 17, 2021

To:Arrhythmia

Glad to hear you enjoyed!

I hope I can make the coming chapters even better!

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:1

Jul 17, 2021

To:Magicherb

You mean the best type of bar

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:3

Jul 17, 2021

To:He'snotevenconscious

What you mean?

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:3

Jul 17, 2021

To:shaneghoul

Spent 10 minutes trying to figure out how to type an umlaut in word only to give up and just copy paste it.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:4

Jul 17, 2021

To:Sevenlock

Vore is a brutal industry I’m afraid

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:3

Jul 17, 2021

To:shaneghoul

Thank you!

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:2

Jul 17, 2021

To:shaneghoul

And now you know

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:3

Jul 17, 2021

To:kazesenken

Thank you so much for the kind words!

I hope I can strike that balance better in the chapters to come.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:4

Jul 17, 2021

Really like some the way dialogue is constructed here and the way world building is woven into it and the mother's inner monologue. ('sometimes the need be' is a great line, idk it just struck me when I read it)

Will be continuing, hope you keep it up!

Drinking Coffee while Dinosaurs Roam My Backyard

Chapter:1

Jul 16, 2021

To:He'snotevenconscious

Thanks!

Glad you liked it (and more importantly Kai)

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:4

Jul 16, 2021

To:He'snotevenconscious

He just did.

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:2

Jul 16, 2021

To:Sevenlock

Thanks so much!

I wasn't planning on continuing or even writing this in the first place to be honest, so now that I am I'm writing it on the fly so I expect the prose, structure and everything to be a bit clunkier than they otherwise could be.

I'm having too much fun to stop writing now though!

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:2

Jul 15, 2021

To:Aero

Thank you!

That was the intention, to create character and atmosphere in a way I felt was less intrusive to the main part of the book. When Kai take about people, we can learn something about her at the same time, it’s often more difficult to do that when she talking about a location.

That was my logic anyway and I had hoped this method would suffice, so I’m glad to hear you like it!

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:1

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