Jul 30, 2021
So I decided to read two chapters before commenting because I wanted to get a more of an idea what the writing was like.
Unfortunately, I don't think this is for me. The idea of following a guy who's part of this corporation of truck drivers who 'isekai' people is a potentially quite a funny one but the source of the humour here (at least what I think it's meant to be) is too self referential to anime culture for my tastes. Using 'isekai' as a verb really doesn't work for me in this context. I do notice you don't have a comedy tag on it so if that's not your intent then I think I'm just not on board with a genuine attempt at this premise (although I'd love to be surprised.)
Generally while it's quite competently written I feel things could a bit snappier and more to the point. There's one moment in chapter two where you set up a block of exposition by pointing out the fact that no one wants to hear exposition. That's the sort of thing that would make me drop an anime on the spot, ngl.
Anyway, I'm going to put this on the back burner for now but I will give it a few more chapters to see where things go.
