Jul 23, 2021
Two things stand out to me here.
First, your transition to a more serious tone I’m the recent chapters has gone really smoothly, I’ve been enjoying them mousy as much as the early chapters which I had found funnier.
Two, I was wondering in my head if Gray might’ve been trans or NB or something and I really like how subtlety you’ve just had Misha refer to them as ‘them’ without having him first explaining it. That’s a really nice from of representation I think, it’s so natural and also just so nice for Gray!
Really good stuff!