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Dougulas Kaien

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An old-school anime fan who enjoys reading light novels and manga.

registered at: Jul 04, 2021

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Oct 03, 2021

Congrats on making the Semi-Finals! 😍👍

Romantadox: A Romantic Paradox in The Final Parallel Universe!

Chapter:10

Oct 03, 2021

This is an interesting but risky way of starting the story. While the prologue is in the present tense, it catalogs past events. So keeping the correct tenses could be a headache.

The Time Capsule - Part 1

Chapter:0

Aug 31, 2021

Congrats on crossing the finish line. Woot! 👍

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:30

Aug 14, 2021

Will mc get paid OT for the upcoming trip?😆

Densetsu Kenshi: Beginnings

Chapter:4

Aug 14, 2021

Oh boy! The massive info dump! 😜😱👍

Densetsu Kenshi: Beginnings

Chapter:3

Aug 14, 2021

To:Tandonaditya

The lack of views is because the website itself doesn't generate too much traffic, compared to almost 17mil in July for Royal Road for example. The Japanese ownership needs to spend money to advertise this site on social media and maybe pay an influencer for a mention.

Densetsu Kenshi: Beginnings

Chapter:3

Aug 14, 2021

Totally confused now. From previous chapter, I thought mc and gal are students in school. Now, we learn they are coworkers in same company. So tell me why he's putting up with her verbal abuse? 😐

Densetsu Kenshi: Beginnings

Chapter:2

Aug 14, 2021

An opening monologue on hand sanitizer. It reminds me of Swordfish film opening re: Travolta's cup of coffee. 😜

Densetsu Kenshi: Beginnings

Chapter:1

Aug 14, 2021

I noticed that wall of " shut up" in this chapter. I think it's a tad excessive and unnecessary, even if you need to hit 45k words for the contest. I would just use one line and cut the rest.

CirCular

Chapter:2

Aug 08, 2021

Luv to see how Marilyn will exploit Jack to the CEO post (or beyond). 😍 Actually, startups are where the money's at, so she could create something on the side, like a tik tok channel featuring slashers and why they got into the business. Get ad sponsors for hockey equipment, hospitals, bandages, pain relievers, etc. 👍

Slashers

Chapter:6

Aug 08, 2021

To:Joe Gold

re: King in yellow. He's the de facto evil mastermind right now, so it's important for the readers to see him more often. Think of the old James Bond movies with memorable villains. They all had frequent cameos while Bond did his thing.

Slashers

Chapter:5

Aug 08, 2021

To:Joe Gold

I'm gonna take you up on the offer of creating a minor slasher character. I'm proposing the "Zenman." Dresses like a bald monk (with a facemask of Buddha); he's always holding a Buddhist prayer beads in one hand and chanting. People who listen too closely falls into a zen state and loses awareness, leaving them vulnerable to a quick death during enlightenment.

Slashers

Chapter:4

Aug 08, 2021

I would drop mention of orthodox judaism (or any religion for that matter) before it gets you into trouble. People tend to get really touchy about religious beliefs and interpretations of such.

Slashers

Chapter:3

Aug 08, 2021

Ok, the MC has lived in the same motel room for THREE YEARS!@# So. . . when are we meeting Normal Bates (get it?)? 😍😂😱😜👍

Slashers

Chapter:2

Aug 08, 2021

This reads like an old-school pulp fiction. It's definitely weird and niche. 😂

Slashers

Chapter:1

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