Jul 18, 2021
To:kazesenken
Thank you for the feedback. I understand what you're saying, I too felt like that the second part lacked... Flavor, compared to the first part and even the other chapters that end on cliffhangers. I guess what I could've done is slicing it up and flashbacking it in the other chapters, while making the first part 'prologue'. Well, that ship has sailed and I'm barely keeping up with reaching my daily goals ;_; anyway, if possible I'll try to make this one a bit leaner perhaps