Jan 12, 2022
To:Momentie
That's actually a good point, I could've ended it with happiness to sort of give the readers a red herring chapter lmao! Ending everything with a shock will gradually fade out effect wise and I have done this so much I can see how it became overused and abrupt.
I had to add that scene regardless since the next few chapters are pretty much the climatic ones. I am also excited to hear yr thoughts/reactions on the flashback ones, and whether you theorized anything from there x) There's probably a reason too why asides from burnout, I ~un~intentionally wanted readers to *not* feel too attached to any bonds haha~
Thanks for reading as usual Momentie >w< Always enjoy yr feedback!