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Find me on my Instagram, Pearlyn.M where I make reels, stories, and appreciate art! *** Winner of MAL x Honeyfeed 2021 with my novel, Realm Assassin.
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Aug 09, 2021
To:fujisprouts
CRIES
TYSM for always loving my story what did I do to deserve you MAN ;___; <3 I'm so glad you think so though!! I am trying to give hints here and there and IMO Lewis is probably one of my more obvious ones. Can't wait to finally unravel the truth in 3 chapters LOL
Aug 08, 2021
To:Deleted User
Aaaa TYSM for reading! And there are more twists to come, hopefully, they'll be much of a surprise too >w<!!
Hello.
Yes, I'm calling today to report a suspicious novel.
Yes, I understand.
Right. You see, the main character, Maribell got pounced by a fookin jellyfish.
Oh wait, I apologize, he's actually the Demon Lord, we foun- wait, hello?? HELLO?????
YOOO WHEN HE SAID FIRE JET TAMAYA I SAID
Tamaya.....TAMAya....WAIT A MINUTE-
All your delinquents are my kids. Tama is precious, Jojo is precious, Romeo is perfection; I love how he destroyed the other deliquents LMAO
To:rinka_desuu
TFW when you can't trust the story, only to find out you can't trust the author either...
You have an unlimited pass to free hugs xD *hugs Rinka <3*
Runo and Lewis are probably once friends, who knows. Or maybe Runo suspects something of Lewis but isn't willing to tell the others xD
Oh Netty QWQ <3
Rinka you're literally my favorite person -//WEEPS Your reactions are the reason why I get motivated to keep writing OTL I apologize that it costs your mental sanity for me to get that adrenaline going tho -//hugs lmao
When I first read this, the gears in my head reversed OTL
Noah oh Noah...he's going to be brought up again in a future chapter so >w< !!
Aug 07, 2021
To:Jeriks RN
Thank you! Make sure you take a break!!
EVERYTIME I see your crying emoji it makes me laugh and want to hug you and feel sad at the same time OTL I apologize for the pain, and right after a calm chapter too lol TYSM for reading -//weeps
I AM HERE! *SPAMS YOU WITH LOVE*
LOL I am liking Honey so much right now!! But the fact that she had that drive to win and then it took them several hours for her to finally beat Gray I AM WEEPING XD
But at the same time, that's what I like about her; I think writing out how she did a genuine smile brings out that humanity in her, and even she does have the feelings of a genuine person who just wants to be accepted and proud of what they accomplished. Love that she was passionate to be playing the same darn game for hours LOL I am so happy her friends are super supportive and congratulated her too < 3333 WHOLESOME WHOLESOME!!
See I didn't lie xD Last time I said this would be relaxing but by that point, I have lost your trust LOL
*nervous sweating* I sure hope so too!
To:JJtheMuse
Yeah, I figured with all the fighting in previous chapters it's time for a quick rest xD Don't get too relaxed though! This is a battlefield of a forest~
LOL everyone keeps saying Dolly looks like Mina OTL And yeah you can Netty has her hair parted to her right, so her left ear can be seen. That's why I mentioned her set of crystal earrings lol TYSM for reading as usual < 3
To:gremnda
Thanks! It's like the calm before the storm lol
Aug 06, 2021
Dialogue between characters is likely your strongest point, although variations can add more to your characters' expressions and tone as they speak.
After going through your chapters, I do want to note that you don't space your paragraph which can be hard for the reader's eyes; I would suggest spacing it out so it would make the flow smoother as well ^w^ Good work < 3