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Pearlyn.M

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Winner of MAL x Honeyfeed 2021 with my novel, Realm Assassin.

registered at: Jul 04, 2021

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Aug 04, 2021

Interesting...I like that change from cliche isekais where characters aren't aware of switches but the princess has confirmed that it happens all the time. No wonder it was more believable to pause the trial. I do like this change, here's to hope they can figure everything out!

Fighting For My Freedom In Another World

Chapter:5

Aug 04, 2021

Happened to stumble on this one shortly after choosing a few more novels to take a peek and I personally love your dialogue most. The struggle of getting published is a relatable feeling. Man I like Konoko, she's quite sweet!

I will say just be mindful that some of your paragraphs like the first one could be broken up into smaller ones. It'll run smoother IMO and makes it easier for readers to read. Good job!! <3

Boundaries

Chapter:1

Aug 04, 2021

NGL This was a novel I chose randomly after just clicking on which novels to read and I am impressed by the first chapter. The vibes I get do feel very melancholic and I can feel the pain of the character trying so hard to be physically strong but then that eventually led to demise. Super sad, but glad that there's another chance in life!!

Fighting For My Freedom In Another World

Chapter:1

Aug 04, 2021

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER PERIOD DON'T SAY IT BACK OR ELSE I AM PULLING THIS UNO REVERSE ON YOU BUT DAMN

DAMN

IT'S INSANE HOW YOU CAN TYPE SO LITTLE BUT MEAN SO MUCH, EVERY WORD HAD SPITE, I FELT THE PAIN IN THAT BACKSTORY. I WANT THIS TALENT..

Charlotte man. I CANNOT!!! Gosh, I love how you did it. It was very straightforward, but I could hear the gossips, the rumors, the backstabbing, and especially PASSIVE AGGRESSIVENESS, IT LEAKS. I knew they were friends before man, she really screwed Honey over soooooo casually. But it makes me sad that Honey doesn't have true friends and sees that fame as true friendship. WHY OTL

Good work as always, your story is the true hidden gem -//WEEPS

Midnight King

Chapter:15

Aug 04, 2021

To:Deleted User

TYSM, I appreciate the support ^w^

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:11

Aug 04, 2021

To:JJtheMuse

Noah was a good boy!! Glad you like the chapter, I hope you won't get too sad with the next two then xD

and yes LOL I am one of those x) This story is going to be an emotional roller coaster for some haha!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:4

Aug 03, 2021

Holy shiet...

This is now my favorite chapter, I have so much to say OMG...
First off, my favorite part has to be when Elias came to the rescue and the way you described his kick mirroring Joshua's. IDK WHY BUT THAT PART WAS SO GOOD. My visuals were screaming- IT WAS INTENSE.

OK but the overall tension, Honey bleeding but her going wild to literally hurt Charlotte, these two definitely has history and I know Charlotte must have screwed her over on something, I feel it, there's just too much hate OTL and the fact that Honey feels shame. I want to know QWQ

Can we get that same "crowd's favor" when we campaign LOL PLS- I WILL become Honey IRL soon OTL

Midnight King

Chapter:14

Aug 03, 2021

Thank you!! >w<

I had your novel in my library, so I do apologize for not getting back yet! I'm too behind with everyone's novels OTL

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:0

Aug 02, 2021

To:Makech

Dropped everything the moment you updated and I will only do it for you now that I have adopted kids here- OTL <333

BLOODY BAT ROMEO

Chapter:13

Aug 02, 2021

Jojo and Tama....SHIP-
KJHSDFJKSDFHJKFDSHDF I AM SORRY THEY'RE JUST SO CUTE HNNN!!
Bich Romeo *BETTER* come back, where's our boy when we need him smh

BLOODY BAT ROMEO

Chapter:13

Aug 02, 2021

WHEN ENTENG WAS PUSHED OFF THE CLIFF I-

Zero.

Chapter:30

Aug 02, 2021

HIME LOL

Please, I would call her that too xD The ghost girl is so cute hnnnn

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:12

Aug 02, 2021

To:JJtheMuse

Woah!! Interesting you brought up the Pokemon trainer. I've never watched Pokemon but for some reason I felt as if his design would be Pokemon inspired lol

Thanks for reading!! < 33 Will check your newest update soon!! I love the names you choose for your puppets, and how they're common synonyms aaa!!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:3

Aug 02, 2021

That awkward moment. When this story LET ALONE this chapter became therapy, thank you for curing temporary depression.

At first the beginning was cool. It was my thing and everything was great until Maribell got the disease in her throat.

Why did you write this.
WHY
DID YOU WRITE THIS. IS THIS WHAT YOU WANT A WINNING ENTRY TO BE? ARE WE REALLY OUT HERE EXPECTING A VISUAL FOR THIS *HEALING* PROCESS-

“When Maribell realized she was in danger” I said *oh no*. Oh no I definitely know what’s coming. Snazzy being the one overreacting? That toothbrush reference? But mostly, Wendy being the one to shove? I genuinely let out a “WOW” when I started to dig my grave even deeper.

But of course, nothing beats the twist of Wendy suddenly stripping. I did a legit facepalm at this moment. The poor jellyfish.

I cried, I laughed, this is a roller coaster ride I did not consent to.

Oh and I bet the first drafts had moaning. Oh you definitely had moans.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:18

Aug 01, 2021

To:fujisprouts

I can't wait for your reaction on the next chapter then <3

Runo is my favorite man, period!! He's been so fun to write ;)
Lewis! Speaking of him, I edited the chapter a little to make him run smoother between his personality shifts instead of making it too gimmicky, so I hope this continues to flow well for the next chapter xD

TYSM for always reading I appreciate you QWQ <3

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:11

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