Aug 01, 2021
To:znf
Hi ZNF!
Thanks for reading as always! Glad to hear of the improvements!
NGL I didn't plan to do the info dump in the way it went as it's supposed to be a longer arc just like how my original plan was to have more Noah and Dolly moments to solidify his character before killing him off, but with how busy life gets I just have to cut things OTL The lore dump was used to also clarify things that happened in Chapter 1 as it was left vague on purpose, but I agree the lore exposition could have been executed better.
As for Lewis LOL
I have my reasons as to why he's obnoxious and why he carries a rock with him. Now, if you want to analyze the foreshadowing, hint...go back to chapter 2 and focus on what Noah said about Lewis, and then read back Chapter 8's lore dump. Heck, you can even analyze the way Lewis speaks and it honestly gives it away x)
