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I am just trying to share my thoughts, lol.
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Aug 18, 2021
Ahem, never in my life could have thought of such great story😂. I love it im gonna share it to more people lol.
I liked the set up and the way you put the dialogues. Keep it up. Try my story too.
Lol the this chapter caught me off gaurd😂. By looking at the prologue i thought this would be a short story but its looong. Nicely done though❤. (Try my novel too)
Aug 17, 2021
Bruhhh!! That's just awesome. The way you write and soundeffects. I was clearly able to understand who spoke the dialogues. Keep it up buddy
Have you read Hitchiker's guide to galaxy? It also had one thing in common with ur story. Earth destroyed and only one human left. Ofcourse yours is a total different concept but i just cant stop myself from comparing space stories with that novel.
Aug 16, 2021
To:Pratpratprat
Thank you so much ! I will keep working hard. thanks
Aug 15, 2021
Just the first line made me chuckle lol😂😂. Interesting prologue. Lets read ur other chapters too.
Aug 14, 2021
To:Dougulas Kaien
I see
Aug 10, 2021
Why do I always feel so much tension between Shikki and Ume😆. Its kind of funny in a way. (I took a break from the website that's why wasn't able to read ur latest chapters and now they are all stacked up lol.)
Nice spacing between the dialogues👍. Your story actually has the power to send the reader into some higher dimension if read with full concentration.
Aug 05, 2021
Awweesome!! I loved the fight... i mean training. I have great expectations for the upcoming chapters.
I wonder why this story has few views. I mean the story is good and its funny too. But there is a plot in this chapter . Great.
Lol the puns are funny😂. Great work! Lets check ur other chapters too.
Aug 04, 2021
Wow thats great that you use this strategy. I dont know about others but i personally like short stories lol😂 btw will you be able to write above 45,000 words? Which is one of the conditions of this contest.
Aug 03, 2021
Lol you sure do post a lot of chapters. But given the length of your chapters is small, its fine i guess.
