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Huracán, Argentina, Writing, in that order. Aiming to write the first latin-american novel in Japan. If you smiled while reading my works, I won 😊 Find me on Instagram! @shuloxwrites
Jun 11, 2023
So reincarnation could be? At least his life will not be so mundane anymore. And I'm intrigued about how she has no idea of anything. Interesting chapter!
Oh, Ichiro is just like me in class, we just can't focus a bit haha. I already like Takuya, hope to see more about him!
This time he better does not miss!
To:Pernodi
Nao IS really cute, hold on because more is coming in the next chapter!
So a collaboration on the TV and his mom telling to turn on the TV... I'm trying to predict the plot twist but I can't. Very refreshing as always, wanting to see more of Grace
To:minatika
It takes some time but is very enjoyable too. And I would love too see you around for more reading, and so I will continue here. Best of luck!
Thanks for the comment, and I know. I have seen you commented the last chapter so I'm glad you made it through the match haha. This was the heaviest sports part still, now Nao will start to be a real main character and the romance will naturally start. Football will be lighter and their relationship stronger. Thanks for commenting, hope to see you then for more!
Desperation can lead a man to the most extraordinary things. In this case, going to a sorceress to fix his relationship. Probably not the most common solution 😂
I like how you wrote the reflexive thoughts on the main character, really helps me to get inside his head. Also, we both have important Jun characters in our entrys, so nice to see another one haha. Will be following when I have time, nice work!
We are just getting started so you are just on time. I'm planning to get really close to the word limit so one week is nothing to worry.
And no, it's not that story 😂 but they have an unique dynamic for sure. Thanks for the comment, I hope to see you around for more!
Jun 10, 2023
To:Tomás Rossi
Thanks a lot, aguante argentina!
Great start for the novel. I really liked the fanstatic setting and how you described each thing going on. Also, the ten year difference is a great starter for a novel of this type, and both twins have lots of potential.
Just as an advice, I would recommend you to add some verbal creativity to each of the description parts, so it doesn't become too repetitive. But still, great job. Welcome and best of luck!
To:Kitsune
Oh wait and see, it's going to be interesting 😊 Waaah thanks for the heads up, that's the product of being worn out after an intense writing session. Hope to see you around soon again!
To:Peace Sign
We are just warming up here, get ready 👀 the three of them are amazing and all crucial to the plot, so hope to see you around soon!
Alright, I can see the message you will want to give throughout the story. I like more the ones who have it. Nice plot setting
Wow that's actually a great idea. There will be many chill chapters (not all of course) so it would be a good fit. Thanks for the comment, hope to see you around again!