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Huracán, Argentina, Writing, in that order. Aiming to write the first latin-american novel in Japan. If you smiled while reading my works, I won 😊 Find me on Instagram! @shuloxwrites
What is an Achievement?
Jul 05, 2023
To:Katsuhito
"It will be a very special day for her" sounds to me like a 1-on-1 with the goalkeeper. Shoot, Takashi!
Thanks for reading Katsu! ❤️
Yes, he predicted Nao in the yukata. Dreams are wild, aren't they? 👀
The chapter was very sweet but I give a lot of value to the initial thoughts. With social media, you can never be good enough and always someone seems to be better, like an endless pit. I'm glad that's a topic in the story, I'm really enjoying it so far
Fox story bro! 🦊 Best animal for sure!
Lmao she sleeping, missed completely the 'companion' part 😅
To:kazesenken
Dream fairies better give him a new thigh
Jul 04, 2023
Quite an interesting build-up so far, but Lvl 100 LMAO that's also huge
Juninho, you certainly know ball. Nice choices! Of course I love Messi even Pirlo is my historical preference. He was just so elegant 🧐
But since the last years of his career, I think there's no match up for Messi. Of course that is a biased opinion though 😅
I should go drink some vanilla essence, I guess that's the only way I could remove the sweetness overload I had with this chapter. You wrote a lovely girl POV and it made me really like Ichigo.
Your start is so good I could catch up in just one sitting. Keep it up, and hope to see you around for more!
I'm rooting for the brother, BEST BROTHER GANGGG!!!
I would recommend you to use some more commas during dialogue. When you say "whatever you do do not take that job..." it feels a little rushed and unorganized, but it's just a personal appreciation. Everyone has their writing style, so if that's yours then forget what I'm saying. Really nice chapter!
Looking forward to see more of this Pirlo free kicks! Btw, which is your favourite free kick taker? I'll probably take the chances of this comments to talk about football if you don't mind 😅
I love how they all speak in short phrases, and Ichigo is showing a really cute side since the start.
Also wine business, huh? There will be some conflict of interest there 🧐
Haruhi analyzing the terrain I see 🧐 but it paid off, and Ichika was damn cute on her suit ❤️ That's what I call a long shot goal 😆
Noooo another picture? Man this is going to be veeeeery painful 😱 Nice chapter!
To:minatika
Wow, that would really be a lot of help. If you noticed a pattern in many chapters, I would love to hear from you, or at least in this one. Again, thanks for all the support! ❤️
Caramel is such a sweet name! I want more of him 😆
Nice start, I'll be following this one. Welcome to the contest!
Secret admirer could be a fit LMAO, sad he could not convey his feelings yet.
Also great and smart move from Vivian, that's peak strategy
