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Sep 09, 2021
To:Baguette
You’ve got it! More time makes all writing better. It’s impossible to rush it and have it come out how you want. Definitely come back to this idea!
Sep 08, 2021
I actually enjoyed your idea a lot! I think with more time and more plot you could get a very good comedy out of this idea of yours
Solid world building in this chapter!
To:N. D. Skordilis
Yep! The story has a ‘slow burn’ approach to it or at least that’s what I was attempting. I wanted to do what I could to have everything slowly build on each other
To:Deleted User
Oh my, thank you for the high praise! I hope the rest of the chapters continue to impress!
Their portals that send souls into the underworld are located in their ‘stomach’ so they have to eat the soul for it to reach their portal. It’s during this process that the soul’s memories and emotions flood into a death since they are more or less ingesting the soul.
Sep 07, 2021
Reggie is quite the tragic character
Sep 05, 2021
To:senpaibaby
Thank you!
He made her a bath🥺
“I don’t have a heart either but the two of you keep breaking it”😂 I love the narrator
To:Verson
Sep 04, 2021
Arsenal is awesome. Loved how he fought!
THIS FIGHT WAS TOO EMOTIONAL FOR ME😭 But I still loved it
To:mycupoft
Thank you! I will not disappoint!
To:mikasajean
Thank you so much. Logan is my favorite as well! And yes I'll get working on the second one after a small reprieve and with a better storyboard set up this time around!