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Oct 02, 2021

To:Nellien

Sometimes to live is the crueler fate

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Chapter:2

Oct 02, 2021

To:N. D. Skordilis

Thanks for reading again! I do appreciate the feedback. There's a lot of things I couldn't trim in time due to the deadline but once the competition's over I'd love to go back and change them.

(Also I didn't even realise the purple bit. Thanks for the tip!)

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Chapter:2

Oct 02, 2021

To:Nellien

Haha it seems that's the consensus

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Chapter:1

Oct 02, 2021

To:N. D. Skordilis

Hey thanks for reading mate, I really appreciate you taking the time. I'll add your novel to my library!

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Chapter:1

Oct 01, 2021

I thoroughly enjoyed Sequence of Kai. I think the way it's written prose-wise is kinda clunky and even now I don't think I got fully into it. However, the world that Oscar created was more than enough to keep my interest.

Not much more needs to be said about the orgasmic dialogue. It slaps from character to character, with my favourites being Kai and Bastien.

The worldbuilding, too, just oozes coolness and style. The way the 'game' and its players are presented. There's so much mystery yet it keeps me wanting to learn more about the world. So much so I hate Oscar for leaving the story there. I wanted to learn more about Bastien and his powers. I wanted to learn more about Amir and his deal.

All in all, I'm happy I finished this novel and I eagerly await more.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:40

Oct 01, 2021

My favourite line in the novel is 'Aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!"

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:38

Oct 01, 2021

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Chapter:34

Oct 01, 2021

Imagine having a gay kiss.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:31

Oct 01, 2021

I want whatever the party bouncer and his dude bro have.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:30

Oct 01, 2021

Ooga booga

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:29

Sep 30, 2021

Big fan of Kai abusing her powers to annoy Trish.

Also damn Kai stop being a dick

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:28

Sep 30, 2021

Must say I'm very down with a chill slice of life arc after those heavy emotional arcs previous

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:26

Sep 30, 2021

Highly enjoyable chapter. Bit of a twist from the cliche of villain hitting protagonist with visions of their traumatic past, and a very metal execution.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:24

Sep 30, 2021

Ohhh shit is Kai thinking of blowing up the whole complex

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:23

Sep 30, 2021

Kai likes kids.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:22

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