Aug 08, 2021
So, I've been greatly enjoying your novel up till this point. Well, I should say that I'm still enjoying it. I like your writing style a good deal, and I like all the characters so far. I think their personalities mix and clash in an entertaining and realistic manner. Which brings me to my first issue so far.
It feels like Teruya and Erena cozied up to one another really fast.
*Minor spoilers for anyone reading this before the story*
Considering that Teruya just drug her around the city in cuffs that same day and they've been openly hostile to each other up until earlier in this day, it seems like they both accepted each other rather fast.
I think if I was as distrusting and paranoid as Teruya I would never fall asleep next to a savage who I just witnessed tie up someone like it was routine.
But, I can see why he would begin to trust her and her him. I just feel it's a little fast.
Considering, however that this was my only issue after nine lengthy chapters is a testament to your writing ability. Anyway, I hope everything I said makes sense. I'm looking forward to seeing more in the future.