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Feb 25, 2022

I have a question if you don't mind. Are all Venators and Rogus kept secret from society? Or do people know about them and just kinda ignore them as if it could never happen to them?

The Venator's Mark

Chapter:3

Feb 25, 2022

Goodness gracious. I guess these gods have never heard of Hammurabi's Code. Instead of an eye for an eye, they go an eye for your whole damn family.
I can't imagine being so petty as to unleash Fenrir on someone who slapped you once.

Anyway, nice fight. Good thing she made those bombs earlier!

WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS

Chapter:8

Feb 25, 2022

So much exposition.... I suppose that's the minimum needed for the Apple of Life, but there was just so much.
It's cool that Kondo is learning magic using her knowledge of science, but I think you went a little overkill. It was hard to keep interest throughout the whole chapter.

One last thing, I was excited to find out about Kondo's soul and origin throughout the novel, but the World God just figured it out instantly and told us everything. I just think that was a lost opportunity.

Anyway. I'ma keep reading. I'm curious to see what'll happen with the drama between Gods.

WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS

Chapter:7

Feb 24, 2022

Interesting, interesting... You've certainly got a good start. I'm excited to see where this all goes.

Also, I'm not sure why, but I totally imagined Casmir and Ulrich as angsty teens before you mentioned their age. Them being ten years old makes a lot more sense. XD

The Venator's Mark

Chapter:1

Feb 24, 2022

To:Momentie

I'll be honest, I forgot why I decided to keep the old chapters up. But I'm a stubbon man who set myself on a path and I'll not abandon it!

Anyway, I think I've gathered all I can from the old chapters. Good ol' Bubbles really whipped me into shape there. The first half was subpar at best and I think the second was a little lost. All in all, not a recommended read.

If you ever find yourself watching paint dry and audibly say 'dang, I'm bored,' then give it a shot. Otherwise, I'd advise against it.

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:9

Feb 24, 2022

To:Deleted User

'Tis a good game. Although I always had to heavily mod it to become the hero Skyrim needs.

Thanks for reading by the by. I never thought one of my comments on UnderCurrent would snag me a new reader. XD

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:6

Feb 22, 2022

I wanted to mention something before I continue.
At times, you switch from first person to third, and third to first without any sort of transition. What I mean is that sometimes, like during the banquet, we seem to be in a omnipotent view point, but the narrator still uses words like 'me.'

Then there are times where Kondo can see exactly what everyone is doing and knows what they're thinking. Just something odd I noticed.

WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS

Chapter:5

Feb 21, 2022

This is Athena? Goddess of Wisdom and War? Beloved daughter of Zeus? An interesting take on such a well-known character.
I'm curious to see where you take this.

WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS

Chapter:4

Feb 21, 2022

I have a question if you don't mind. So the gods will be restricted from using their divine powers except in emergency. Well, I imagine the restriction is for entertainment, but what exactly constitutes an emergency? Can the gods die if they're killed in this new world? What if they just see everything as an emergency? Is there some form of limitation on how many times they can release their power?

Also, I want to pummel that bitch of a kid who said that they just watched and enjoyed Kondo getting bullied.
That's her name right? My memory's not too good.

WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS

Chapter:3

Feb 19, 2022

To:Momentie

Thanks man! This was probably my favourite chapter to write so far. Mostly because king Alister is my second favourite character. He's just so fun to write. My actual favourite hasn't even shown up yet, by the by.

Anyway, thanks again for reading. It's awesome knowing someone is actually reading my stuff and enjoying it.

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:9

Feb 17, 2022

Dang... Things are getting heated.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:5

Feb 14, 2022

To:Hans Trondheim

I can see that. It's actually sparked an interest in me and now I'm conducting research on current and past geopolitics. Mostly in Europe.
Speaking of history, Kuro mentioned wars started over a bucket? And a few other absurd reasons. What wars were those? I have a difficult time believing that and my curiosity has been peaked.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:3

Feb 14, 2022

Bold move; taking a pot shot at the U.S. Although you're not wrong, my nationalist personality compels me to use my big stick. That or spew propaganda.

I'm kidding of course.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:3

Feb 14, 2022

Kuro really needs some confidence. I think I would be insulted if someone kept refusing to drop formalities and refused to accept a better treatment. Especially after multiple attempts. It's like refusing gifts or friendship.

I hope someone can instill that confidence in him sometime soon. I can totally understand humility because I was the same. But he's getting to the point where it almost seems arrogant. Like he's so adamant in his self-doubt that he refuses to see himself from any other perspective.
And I actually enjoy that. Although he makes me want to punch him, it's a love punch. Like a punch to a friend when they're being stupid. Gotta bring 'em back to reality.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:1

Feb 13, 2022

To:Momentie

Heck yeah. Gotta get 'em ready for the rest of the novel ya know? I mean for the princess. Can't have her personal warriors be a bunch of push-overs.

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:8

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