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Mar 14, 2022

I have some questions if you don't mind.

Why is this teleportation spell forbidden? And why does Luz know it?

Is it because it uses life force, or is that just what Luz had to do to cast it because of low mana or something.
And if it's forbidden, why does Luz know the spell? Shouldn't it have been burned or just kept secret?

If these are answered in future, no need to answer them here.

Lost souls: Road to Godhood

Chapter:2

Mar 14, 2022

Hmm... Interesting. I wanted to mention a few things before I continue.
You've got a nice way of painting pictures. Your verb choice when decribing the dragon's roar and village burning were very grand and fairly powerful. Although at one point, I had thought that an actual rupture opened in the ground and creatures from hell were crawling out.
It might be good to dial the grand imagery down a bit when describing random creatures. I thought the animals running from the burning forests were actual hell-spawn rising from the ground until like three paragraphs later.

Also, describing Az and Michael as 'looked as if they were 12' was a bit strange. Why not just say they're 12 years old?
Oh and any 12-year-old knows what's happening to the village. There's no way Az would ask 'Why are you crying? What happened?'
I'm pretty sure any age could figure out what was going on. I think it would have been better to have someone hysterically try to convicne the others to go back and get their parents out of the village. Just a thought.

Anyway! I'm eager to keep reading! I'm curious to see where this whole thing goes.

Lost souls: Road to Godhood

Chapter:1

Mar 12, 2022

To:Gulfstream

Thanks man! I'm fairly proud of this chapter so it's cool to see everyone liking it!

I like to imagine all the big rangers sit on one side while Naz awakwardly sits in the corner on the otherside beside the princess and her servant.
Oh and it's just the Eclipse Rangers. The King's rangers are in different carriage. Although the thought of like twenty or so people in a single cabin is kinda funny.

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:9

Mar 12, 2022

Heya, 'tis I. The author.
This chapter was a bit short and uneventful, but there is no need to worry! The next chapter should be even shorter and I should have it released by tomorrow. Hopefully.
After that however, I may divert attention away from this book for a bit to work on the monthly challenge. It'll be set in the same world as this one, but otherwise it'll be completely unrelated.
This is all a maybe though.

Anyway. Thanks again for reading. Now let's hope I can actually write a chapter in a day!

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:11

Mar 03, 2022

I'll be honest, that little blunder in the discord gave me a good laugh.

But in all seriousness, I wouldn't worry about it too much. I think a lot of people understand it was an honest mistake.
And I'll still be here reading at my fastest pace.

WHEN I GOT REINCARNATED AS A SPIDER WITH MY GODDESS

Chapter:1

Mar 02, 2022

To:Hans Trondheim

Don't we all? Imagine a world run by Peter the Greats. 'Twould certainly be better then the US's current leader... Although that's not saying much.
Politics aside, I was referencing an animated show I think just called Clone High. I never saw it, but the premise is a bunch of historical figures going through high school.

Also, I see what you mean now. About the reactions. I remember things like that happening while I was in school. Mostly to me, but that's neither here nor there.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:16

Mar 02, 2022

To:Hans Trondheim

You got me there. Fortunatly, none of my friends have turned out to be long dead Russian Tsars.

You've oberved it on your own students? I assume you're not teaching in clone highscool. Are you saying your students have revealed dark secrets to you or they've accepted each other despite their past?

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:16

Mar 02, 2022

To:Hans Trondheim

I suppose that's true. But if I found out one of my students was Ivan the Terrible himself, I might not be storming castles to get him back.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:16

Mar 02, 2022

To:Hans Trondheim

Oh, I meant more about the whole Witch thing. I know he blames himself for the drama between her and Maddie. I was just surpised to see that he was able to accept Lily's past.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:16

Mar 02, 2022

I'm a bit surprised Kuro was able to forgive Lily, even going so far as this to get her back.
I guess it's surprising because he was so casual about it. He doesn't seem to have any qualms about what he's doing or why.

Also, I meant this comment for the last chapter. I'm too lazy to go back and re-type it though. 'But it takes just as much effort to type all this out doesn't it' you say? Maybe.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:16

Mar 02, 2022

Huh? Strange... How did she go from princess to witch? Guess I'll have to find out.

Also there's a very easy and simple solution to too many people in love with one person. Polygamy.
I kinda hope that was Lily's answer because that would be hilarious.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:14

Feb 28, 2022

To:Deleted User

Yes well... I never thought I would need a number higher than two, so I never bothered learning.
I'll let you deal with all those fancy numbers.

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:9

Feb 28, 2022

To:Momentie

And some great company you two are.
But one day. One day it'll be a party.

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:9

Feb 28, 2022

To:Deleted User

Alister is everything I think a king should be. So it's cool to see so many people enjoying him. (All two of you. XD)

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:9

Feb 28, 2022

Quick question. Why do you use "..." as a sort of interlude between paragraphs?
I've always noticed it, but it only just now caught my curiosity. Sometimes it's used to break up long monologues, but other times it's just there.

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 3

Chapter:10

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