Feb 11, 2022
Ha! I got here first for once! Take that Momentie!
Anyway. Nice ending. A little to happy for my tastes, but that's just because I enjoy tragedy too much. It wrapped everything up real fast and effectively and we actually got an explanation for the reincarnation. My only real issue is that the story was too short. But I know it was for the challenge and a month isn't exactly enough time to write a thousand page epic.
If you continue to write more stuff, I'll be sure to check it out.
Also, a side note before I return to the darkness, the idea that the uncle is this giant of a man who just wanders wherever he wants, then starts shouting for his nephew is hilarious. Love that guy. Best character.
