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Apr 01, 2025

To:Han Quixote

alr alr i see what we're working with now. about the atlas thing, it wasnt that it was OUT OF PLACE but more like he was just a mold that u could fill up. i was just like "oh this is how his personality is." To be fair though, part of me also thought hes starting to regain his memories or something cuz of the sudden change in demeanor 😭
I'd say it was out of character, but i dont know what his character really is. That knowledge belongs entirely to you rn. Thats how ill put it
This is just one chapter out of many tho and u really should continue on. dont take anything im saying too seriously and go rewriting the whole story LMAO. it works bro and honestly makes me more interested to see where youll take atlas's character from here

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:22

Apr 01, 2025

To:Han Quixote

you know bro.. i never thought someone else would put so much thought into one of my works 😭
thats a fair point though. i reread it and what seemed a bit too sudden was just katerinas change in attitude. i definitely jumped the gun.
ive realized things are happening at too quick of a pace so its probably best to slow down. im just lazy tho i have to actually put thoughts onto paper 😞 always the hardest part

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:4

Apr 01, 2025

no... NOOO IVY WOULD NEVER

Sales Pitch

Chapter:15

Apr 01, 2025

a bit of jeter pov??!?!? HOW INTERESTING
i like where this is going

Sales Pitch

Chapter:14

Apr 01, 2025

yo atlas is talking so much all of a sudden 😭 and mary just keeps getting more and more emo
Looks like Mary's problem has been resolved then. To be honest, it was a BIT anticlimactic. But i have no issue with it, especially since youre doing so well at furthering her and Atlas's dynamic.
I'm starting to gauge Atlas as a person a little better now. He's sharp. Very very serious too. I see him as the type of person who doesnt give in to mindless debauchery or his own desires. Very goal-oriented.

I just want to see where things go from here. Atlas is definitely the main interest rn and im really wondering how ur gonna further him. Let us see..

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:22

Apr 01, 2025

YOU DESERVE IT BRO 😭

#New Chess Anime! En Passant Grandmaster gets anime adaptation!?

Chapter:1

Mar 30, 2025

things are getting pretty wholesome

Space Cowboy Robot Love (SCRL)

Chapter:6

Mar 30, 2025

yeah she aint the one

Space Cowboy Robot Love (SCRL)

Chapter:4

Mar 29, 2025

To:Han Quixote

if you do end up revising, im down to reread stuff and im def looking forward to change if there will be some

prolly dragging this but the humanities major joke made me laugh out loud again bro 😭

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:21

Mar 29, 2025

BRO ARE YOU OKAY?? It feels like youre writing your own day in the life out in this chapter 😭 I guess Mary is just that relatable.
I don’t think you’re capable of writing a bad chapter anymore bro. This was great. And my impression of Atlas has changed. Hes not really in the same state of mind that Mary is in, and maybe Mary isnt in the state of mind that she thinks she’s in either.
Bro I could’ve sworn I saw you make a chapter called the premature ending or something (which I was going to read when I had the time). What happened man did you change your mind?
Either way, whether you got some sort of newfound motivation or you just couldn’t stand leaving the story the way it was, im glad you at least dropped this chapter. This one, especially, makes the story feel real to me. Maybe it’s just because I know that you’re pouring yourself out onto the canvas that is the story but you’ve definitely written something very interesting here.

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:21

Mar 27, 2025

my boy is the only sane one in the verse

Space Cowboy Robot Love (SCRL)

Chapter:3

Mar 27, 2025

quick development but im all for it

Space Cowboy Robot Love (SCRL)

Chapter:2

Mar 26, 2025

To:Han Quixote

i get it man
glad that ur finishing the story. i really understand what you mean though. its like its too much work to write it all out when you yourself already know what happens. and you yourself were the one most invested in it in the first place. maybe im yapping idk
Yeah dude I could tell you're a huge fan of schindlers list (which i havent even seen LMAO). Its gonna be because of you that i watch it if i ever get around to it tho.
What you do is completely up to you though bro! even if you do decide to leave someday or not continue this story thats fine bro. i'll never forget you :D
This was a really enjoyable month because of you and im grateful. I can tell things will probably slow down (at least, they have for me) but ay bro youve helped me a lot and i hope ive helped you as well. this is sounding like a farewell message haha but im just glad i met you

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:8

Mar 25, 2025

To:Deck of Cards

that would make you much smarter than kat 😭😭😭

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:4

Mar 25, 2025

To:Han Quixote

Wanting to readjust the chapter to give the reader a better sense of its purpose is fair tbh, but im just one guy and maybe another reader would get what ur trying to do. Maybe its just your perfectionistic tendencies taking the reign. But.. if you can somehow make it better.. that might be the move.
Also bro i HIGHLY doubt that the whole Sanctivus idea being from your backlog will be an issue. There's no way someone's going to go back into the archives (LMAO) of deleted honeyfeed novels and check to see if you took one concept from one of your works and applied it in another. But.. again.. if you can somehow make it better...
the "humanities major" thing is definitely poking fun at julian isnt it 😭
To be honest I admire how organized and conscientious you seem to be. Like i procrastinate on EVERYTHING and youre over here going crazy putting your all into things. I really really respect that about you.
Well though, if you're planning on leaving the story sometime soon, ill give you a teary-eyed farewell. IM GONNA MISS YOU BRO 😭😭
That's fair enough though you seem like a really studious person. Go focus on uni and secure your future and all that. I'm sure you'll be back sometime hahahaha when you get the itch to write. that'll be interesting
ANYWAY tho dude ur amazing i dont know how we've just gotten to know each other like this through honeyfeed comments LMAO. Do you have discord (🤓) or something that we can talk on bro its like theres been a glass wall separating us. sort of poetic, but sad at times...

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:8

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