Apr 10, 2025
NOO ATLAS HAD HER BRO NOT MY GOAT
i feel like these two chapters have been the peakest so far, especially with the cliffhangers. i guess that should be expected because its the climax (or if not, its nearing it), but still, you havent disappointed yet bro. its hard to believe that this is chapter 28 tho thats crazy.
i will say good job, but if theres ONE thing that you couldve done better, it would be making a more suspenseful mood. maybe its because there was no setting change, or maybe im just salty cuz the fight ended sort of anticlimactically. but still, if you somehow manage to do that, this will be golden.
regardless dude im loving this. still the best novel ive read on here to date. looking forward to the next chapter (.. i feel like i always say this)
