Apr 02, 2025
To:Deleted User
idk whether to feel happy or sad from your feedback 😭 but i know one thing and its that i appreciate it nonetheless
about the GAPS: i noticed this too ngl. there was a dilemma i was going thru while pondering over it, actually. i was deciding on whether to give more time to adriel and his friends at home or to spend time on introducing characters. And as you can probably tell, I chose the latter. not sure if this will come back to bite me later but we'll see lol
the thing is it seems like we're pretty far into the story but we have barely even started bro thats the drawback of all this. and also a consequence of my terrible work ethic LMAO
about the "tap tap" part. That was pretty experimental of me. I was actually wondering how youd respond to that while writing it lol. Hmm maybe theres something else that could be done there.
I am REALLY curious as to why you say this is the chapter that makes u feel gloomy though. It makes me happy that you pointed it out, but like.. this one seems pretty upbeat, at least to me
