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Jul 30, 2021

Hahaha, he got exposed before he could execute his plan xD. I hope that's not the end of the "Shizuka romance" sub-plot though lol :')
One thing I have noticed about the story is that it's pretty slow-paced and a lot of internal dialogue xD. There's nothing wrong with that, I really enjoy all the internal dialogue, but the intro and planning were both 1 chapter each and the first test is 3 chapters long, haha. Anyways I'm excited to see how it develops :)

Slacker Squad: Why Work When You Can Cheat?

Chapter:4

Jul 27, 2021

If they got something wrong it would be kinda sus for a group to all get some certain questions wrong 😂Anyways can't wait to see how the story'd play out in the next chapter! xD

Slacker Squad: Why Work When You Can Cheat?

Chapter:3

Jul 23, 2021

Ohhhh, asking that question directly! Can't wait for next chapter xD

Purely Coincidental

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2021

Hi! I think this is a funny concept, would love to see how this would develop! Anyways, feel free to check out my novel too :)

Purely Coincidental

Chapter:1

Jul 22, 2021

To:ParagonStar

Lmao, I described this chapter with the exact same adjective as you did without me even seeing 😂I guess this chapter succeeded in making us feel a certain way :>

Slacker Squad: Why Work When You Can Cheat?

Chapter:2

Jul 22, 2021

This chapter is hilarious, I love the grandiose discussion/debate about cheating 😂

Slacker Squad: Why Work When You Can Cheat?

Chapter:2

Jul 22, 2021

I'm loving this story so far :D the dialogue is witty and humorous, and I really like the character, they're like caricatures, but in written form! Anyways, I really like it! Great expectations for this series!

Slacker Squad: Why Work When You Can Cheat?

Chapter:1

Jul 22, 2021

Interesting concept! Would like to see more on how this would turn out! :) Feel free to check out my novel if you're at it :)

My Crazy American Father

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2021

Haha this story is genuinely so addicting. Love all the twists and turns xD

Being a Girl Online Made Me Become a Girl in Real Life

Chapter:6

Jul 21, 2021

To:mtsuu

And feel free to check out my novel too!

(UNFINISHED) My Thinking Story

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2021

Wow! This was a long one! One recommendation is that the titles of chapter 0 & chapter 1 is kind of confusing (with 0 being "my first monologue?" and 1 being "my very first monologue"); I recommend using something along the lines of simply "prologue" or smtn like that. Regardless, good work, and good luck ^_^!

(UNFINISHED) My Thinking Story

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2021

Quite funny and a pretty unconventional type of story! As a fan of meta humour and 4th wall breaks, I think this is well done and definitely unique; unlike any other story here xD! Interested to see how it would turn out!

(UNFINISHED) My Thinking Story

Chapter:0

Jul 21, 2021

Great story! I love how you turned the common trope of Truck-Kun into an organization! xD Excited for how this would turn out!

TRUCK-KUN

Chapter:0

Jul 21, 2021

Truly a masterpiece, I believe that this great work will go down in history along with the likes of Shakespeare and Dickens.

My shitty isekai got isekai'd?!

Chapter:0

Jul 21, 2021

I like the story, nice and fun! One thing that confused me for a moment is the "11th year of high school" part, I believe it means "Grade 11" right? Because it makes it sound like there's 11 years in high school ! Anyways, good luck!

A Kat's (GOD AWFUL!!!) Blessing

Chapter:1

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