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Aug 11, 2021
The plot is pretty much good. I like the story. I will read the next chapter too😊
To:Deleted User
Actually I thought it will be good if it just gets mix with chapter 1 as there is a little intro about the characters and that won't fit with the context of my 2 chapter hence no prologue. Really Thx for reading. I hope that my story must have been an engaging one.☺
Aug 09, 2021
Thank you for your encouragement. I will surely continue 😆
Aug 08, 2021
To:Dougulas Kaien
I guess both.
Yeah i did it purposely. So I can get comfortable as well as with readers.
Aug 05, 2021
I am not much in reading. But I like to tell you what is prominent here. I feel like the details work for you as a double edge sword, many times they are the soul of your writing but sometime it feels like you are just elongating a scene. It's just my personal opinion. You are still the pefectionist in details so please give me some advice on it as you get time by reviewing my novel. I am pretty much bad in details.
I read in one blow till now it got me hooked to it. Interesting. Even though your writing is not your passion but it does not look like it😏. You are quite experienced. I will read more as I get time.
Aug 04, 2021
Still hooked 😍 on Jack he is my favourite character. Also, I have added many things in my chapter 1 if you get time to read ☺ please do visit.
Aug 03, 2021
Why does not this happen in real life?😔 reference Jack x Marilyn.
Aug 02, 2021
To:Joe Gold
So basically you mean to say that I need to introduce charcters first and then go telling about their back stories like FMAB etc. Well I gave it a thought but later came to a conclusion that it will become to much common, hence I avoided that start. And please come again and tell me your points on next chapter.
To:Bucky
Yeah it helped 🙂. I will try to use it in coming chapters. And this is also my 1st time writing a novel hence I thought about to ask advices.
Your details are really interesting. If you get time give me some advice on it by reviewing my novel.
I see you stick to the point. That's good because readers get to engage in it. And thank you for reviewing my novel.
Aug 01, 2021
To:Pearlyn.M
Your details are perfect. Can you give me a piece of advice on it, I am pretty much bad in it. By reviewing my novel.
Really hooking me into it.