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Aug 19, 2021
Ahhhhh. That was very little, I wish there was more. I really liked how you worked on this work, I hope you keep posting and if you can read my novel and comment too I would be immensely grateful
Ahhhhh. That was very little, I wish there was more. I really liked how you worked the dialogues, I hope you keep posting and if you can read my novel and comment too I would be immensely grateful
I don't know exactly what the story is going to be about (I think it's going to be a slice-of-life about being a transfer student to Japan as far as I could tell), but I thought it was good in general. I hope you keep posting more chapters and if you can read my novel and comment I would be extremely grateful
the chapter was good, but a little small. I hope you keep posting more chapters
Wow, I also hated when they sent homework on vacation, like I'm taking a vacation to rest why are you sending more work?
Interesting. I can't say for sure if I liked it, but I'm curious to read the next chapters. keep posting and if you can read my novel and also comment on what you think of it I would be immensely grateful
To:kazesenken
Thanks for saying. I will try to redo it and improve it to make it a better way to read
I really liked it. Too bad the chapters are short, I hope you keep posting and if you can read my novel and comment too I would be extremely grateful
I liked the contrast you made of the girl telling the cat that no one would adopt him if he didn't accept the humans' affection and then doing the same thing, showing that she was talking to herself. That start was good, keep it up and if you can read my novel and comment on what you think of it I would be immensely grateful
Aug 18, 2021
To:Swanny
Thanks :)