May 01, 2022
To:Momentie
I am eternally grateful for all of your comments. I knew that my novel was a difficult read and I had an inkling of where I went wrong before but because of your constructive criticism I'll be able to work on my weaknesses in a more systematic manner.
I will definitely try to introduce characters more carefully so that they're more memorable and outline the plot BEFORE I start writing. What you said about my descriptions is a surprise to me. I think you are too kind. I am usually not a fan of overly descriptive novels but I can see how I held back a little too much and didn't make the setting or the characters tangible enough.
Thank you for being my second reader. 'Epic-360-no-scope docking' is one of the best compliments I've ever received and I shall cherish it for the rest of my life.