Aug 31, 2021
It's a little difficult to follow along, and I'm not overly fluent in German so It's a bit confusing to need to translate the various words that pop up if I can't figure it out by the context. However, If you can more clearly separate the conversations from one another using " " and, descriptors such as 'she said, he said, she/he yelled and so on, It would go a long way towards being more easily readable. As an after thought Would it be reasonable to ask that you put an English translation after the German? Not sure if it's your native language or not, but an easy way to add it in would be like; veleicht(easy to use) or veleicht(simple). If you need advice on English language structure I can answer a few questions now and then.
