Sep 02, 2022
"Youth are saying it looks like imagery from the recent horror game, Hospital." Again, I like the way you can illustrate a horrible scene without resorting to detailed description. Allegory worked really well here.
And this line: "She's not exactly subtle." I can see Pyro wearing that logo on a t-shirt. The fact that she was in restraints while the doc worked on her tells me that Joe warned him ahead of time. 😄
In my opinion, I think you've got a creative, well-told story here that I enjoyed reading to the end and would recommend to my friends. Two 👍👍!
