Nov 18, 2021
One of the most entertaining pieces I've read in the contest, and, to be honest, this site in general. My only gripe with it is that this doesn't feel like a complete story, but rather an arc (a small one, even) of the story (this could be easily alluded to the small time window of the contest, plus you've said more would come in the future so it's not too bad). Would definitely check it out if/once more comes.