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Certified weeb who dreams of being an author. Wagering man. Will gush at Fate given any chance possible.
Jun 04, 2022
To:Deleted User
Yup
To:OscarHM
Yeah I’ve been working (albeit slowly) to find a more digestible solution. Not sure how well it would go though, but yeah.
And yes my cover is amazing isn’t it :3
To:znf
Yeah I don’t have the best prose out there, but still glad you liked the opening
Don’t worry he has main character buff :)
To:Sevenlock
His mighty roar shall be heard in years to come!
To:MrRejex
My IRL artist friend
Jun 02, 2022
All the discord memes aside, I'm really glad I picked this up blind. The thing with Asian society cuts deep, and your narration is superb. 10/10 would recommend
Jun 01, 2022
To:otkrlj
I like Nari tho
To:Fuzzy Rabid Usagi
I'm guessing it's the message format that I'm not used to. Not that it's bad, but more in the lines of something novel
Okay I have to get this out of my system first boffer deez nuts
Jokes aside, this one has a very "unusual" style, especially compared to your other entries. I'll wait to see if the next few chapters can deliver, but so far there's potential.
Apr 27, 2022
“That’s when the story begins”
I have no idea what I’ve just read but you know what I like it
Feb 10, 2022
To:WALKER
*the first few chapters weren’t of the highest quality
To:DarkerMahogany
Yeah I did pad it up at the beginning, which is actually why the first few chapters of the highest quality. In the end I just said screw it and made a borderline shitpost chapter, and I was actually pretty satisfied with the result.
Nov 18, 2021
One of the most entertaining pieces I've read in the contest, and, to be honest, this site in general. My only gripe with it is that this doesn't feel like a complete story, but rather an arc (a small one, even) of the story (this could be easily alluded to the small time window of the contest, plus you've said more would come in the future so it's not too bad). Would definitely check it out if/once more comes.