Jun 17, 2022
I liked before, but now we’ve added Nyk in a dress along with mechs. I can positively say not only is the writing great, the story intriguing but the plot gets more and more interesting as time goes on. The tropes used are ones that I really adore; I can understand some people not being a fan of them but many of them are close to my heart. As mentioned before, there is a great mix between the cyber fantasy I love and the light novels that are dear to me - this is becoming even more evident the more I read.
Your characterisations are great, especially for Lulu! Dressing Nyk up, refusing to even listen to his name, treating him like property, pretending he’s a dog, but also trying to spoil him in a similar fashion while demanding work. It all creates a very clear picture in my mind of just who she is - she’s probably the most fleshed out character, even more so than Nyk. I don’t think that’s an issue of course, Nyk is a mystery we are still solving and having side characters with depth is important so I think you’re doing a great job right now.
