Jun 27, 2022

To:Deleted User

I don't feel like it was Sakura's place to say that information, so I'm not really happy with her rn. Although she did seem to pause and think about what she was saying, it does kind of seem that maybe she knew that saying it would win her the game. Despite that, there is also the chance that maybe she put it that way because she wanted to correct him in that situation because that relationship means a lot to her.

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Jun 27, 2022

To:Liber Mercury

He’s got this!

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Jun 27, 2022

To:Liber Mercury

Waaaah this is the nicest thing to read! I’m so glad ❤️

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Jun 26, 2022

To:Liber Mercury

We love the tsundere

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Jun 26, 2022

To:Liber Mercury

Akira's got his priorities 😂

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Jun 26, 2022

To:Deleted User

That was a good line from Akira! Hopefully he can keep them up

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Jun 26, 2022

idk what is going on but i’m here for it

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Jun 26, 2022

Aaaaaaah, I'm in love! Your prose is beautiful, your use of vocabulary is eloquent and the entire mystery vibe and theme you have going on here is great. I loved the interaction between these two, it was witty and funny! You really have a winner on your hands here honestly, I am thoroughly impressed and excited for more!

PS. I agree with WALKER, this is in best girl territory

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Jun 26, 2022

Despite the lack of usual punctuation, this story's style manages to stay very easy to read and enjoyable. I hope you keep this style throughout. You've started a nice little pseudo-mystery story in a very comfortable anime-esque style that just makes me giddy. I'm super excited to see what comes of this!

Also, low key is that girl going to be still all about solving mysteries even though he lied to her about the existence of mysteries in the first place. Please, give me cute chuuni detective girl! I beg you!

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Jun 25, 2022

To:Momentie

👀

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Jun 25, 2022

To:Deleted User

I'm really glad you had fun with it, that is everything to me! I don't even want to think about what Sakura might do if she wins.

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Jun 24, 2022

To:ALTaccounti

Based on how Chika is going about things, it seems she'd be happy as long as there's a romance she can observe! Maybe she'd even be totally fine if he got together with Sakura, who knows?

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Jun 24, 2022

This story is getting better and better by the chapter. You've managed to increase descriptions, I can now place myself inside this world now and I love it. The blend of sci-fi and magic is great and not something I've seen very often so it feels exciting and new to me. But despite the freshness of these concepts, having references to events and things from our world, our time and our history in here really helped me relate to the world and understand it even more. Not to mention, those references left me with some wild theories about what's going on! Overall, this continues to impress me, nice work!

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Jun 24, 2022

To:ALTaccounti

I feel like this Chika may have a little more of a brain 😂

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Jun 24, 2022

To:ALTaccounti

Yusssss!

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