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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Or find me on the Honeyfeed Discord Currently writing GLINT. Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Jul 03, 2023
To:Deleted User
Bruh you'll definitely catch any more Aliens lines then haha 😆 Pretty sure there will be at least one more line somewhere along the way, since they mostly come out at night---mostly xD
To:Xiellion
Oh yeah that's for sure 😅 Makes her a complex character, but her wholesome and cute side of her personality I think is what I like most 😍
Oh yeah definitely, the first two films are king in my eyes Seen both so many times by now. Guess I'm a bit like Walker and just like referencing some of my favorite franchises lol There's a scene later on in this story where I try hard to emulate the uncertain fear and despair the colonial marines felt when they were traversing into that cooling tower in Aliens; And they just didn't know what the aliens looked like or where they were hiding---could have been anywhere ala "they're coming out of the damn walls!" type of scenario haha Should be fun to write though lol
To:FumoDrawer_95
Sanae is the epitome of wholesomeness so I'd probably choose her too 😍
Oh, you're the first person that caught the Aliens reference haha Though there's several big changes to the lines so I didn't think anyone would ever notice lol Yeah I'm a big fan of the franchise so I'm assuming you are too if you caught that reference 😆
Jul 02, 2023
Yeah that's basically what I was going for haha Hiro is basically just Guts but with like, a Kpop pretty boy face
Hmmm? What part? Sanae being dandere? Seemed pretty harmless to me
Oh those are some pretty good observations Sanae is kind of a dynamic character to say the least since there's always something going on that affects her personality, namely in front of certain people Hopefully she's not trying to hide something haha
Jul 01, 2023
Heh, don't worry though These next few chapters will mostly just be wholesomeness and worldbuilding and some bonding lol
Yeah, but Hiro is more of a gentle-natured chad haha Nothing crazy and outgoing like Mogami from Government-Issued Girlfriend 😆
Jun 30, 2023
To:Syed Al Wasee
Ah yeah, to be honest I confused Ayanami at times too 😅But he mostly goes by Daichi so it should be a smooth transition lol Though, the Ayanami name is more of a reference to the Japanese naval destroyer Ayanami from WW2, which is what Rei Ayanami might've got her namesake from
Oh dang, you read fast 😆 But yeah, Makoto is a bit shady, but we'll find out soon if he's anything more than just a sly prankster lol
The irony in making Kwan make another promise after him just confessing to breaking his previous promise 😅 Maybe Annika is gonna have to learn some life lessons about men like Ori did lol
Oh cool found, it thanks
Oh and if you want a tip for helping nail down your tenses, I recommend writing your stories in past tense since that's the easiest one Just think of it like: everything needs to be written in the past tense, except dialogue, and inner monologues (not to be confused with narration). So everything is being narrated as if it already happened, not as if it's happening as you're writing it
Sanae is kind of a dynamic character to say the least since there's always something going on that affects her personality, namely in front of certain people
