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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Currently writing "My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!" Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Sep 18, 2023
To:Momentie
Yeah, I try to be realistic with the world, taking into account stuff like economics and politics when I can Helps keep things more interesting I think
Sep 16, 2023
To:Xiellion
I think cutely is only used once this chapter, but I'll change it up in other chapters if it's too reoccurring
Sep 13, 2023
Lol maybe, thanks for reading thoroughly enough to notice something like that I think everyone has some pet words they use more than other authors though
He was something of a celebrity before, for not the usual reasons, but it's a spoiler to mention details at this point 😅
Oh and there's also a little typo on the (I have to stop he-") line where there's a random quotation mark at the end But guess you can't really fix that now 😅
Bruhhh that's amazing! Referencing some pals as beverages in the chapter 😆 Was a bit spooked but in the good way lol Love fourth wall breaks like that. I did something similar with GiG back in the day but I think peeps got the wrong idea 😅 Anyways yeah, Suvi is proving to be a thorn in Kwan's side. And she has an entire bar under her control! She's proving a formidable foe and also a formidable seductress
Sep 12, 2023
Bruv great minds think alike, we have a same chapter title 😆 Professor Juni do be alluring though without her even trying that much lol
Sep 11, 2023
It's the climax of the volume, not of the whole story I didn't want a montage because everything that happens here is important for the narrative and for the character arcs This and the next chapter set up the rest of the story
Well I would probably have more people getting upset if she stripped off their underwears too lol It wasn't meant to be fanservice, unless you just see it like that I've stripped for doctor appointments before, this is no different Sanae can't sense curses, she needs to see them visually, so that's why she needed to check her whole body for any curses too during the ritual
Oh, that's a good idea too But I prefer more complex storylines with dynamic characters, so I opted for something less streamlined It's not really supposed to be some generic bad experience at the start of the isekai, but more like the climax of the volume.
The knot she tied around her arm was to stop the curse from spreading higher to her head, ahead of time She needed rags to make a knot, so she tore away her clothes since it was an emergency, and she would need to see the curse mark progress on her body once the ritual finishes Same thing with Daichi. His clothes needed to come off so Sanae could see far along the curse marks had gotten on his body.
Hmmm I wonder if Annika saw Suvi leave Kwan's room. That would be the usual romance trope at least Or maybe Annika and Suvi met somehow hmm
Sep 09, 2023
Yeah, he's a curious fella Sort of alike to Daichi like that Helps gives characters more agency I think if they're willing to question the world they're a part of
Sep 07, 2023
Yee. Everyone's got at least a few skeletons in their closet👁️
Sep 05, 2023
Yee, spooky but glitchy mirror has a habit of popping up in random places
Helps keep things more interesting I think
Sort of alike to Daichi like that