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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Or find me on the Honeyfeed Discord Currently writing "Reincarnated as a Background Character".
Jul 20, 2025
To:Ashley
Lemons are even better when they're upgraded to lemonade
To:Armorien
Thanks for reading! And in this case, the train lurched because the entire bridge collapsed. A decent amount of trains and infrastructure that weren't retrofitted after the kobe 1995 earthquake experienced some setbacks during the 2011 earthquake. But I'd be scared to be on any bridge when a large earthquake hits 😩
Jul 19, 2025
To:Ochroleucous
Walker is just too quick😎 Thanks for coming by though!
To:WALKER
A drawing of Rice Showers would be too powerful for this world
To:kazesenken
I can imagine Widdle wouldn't be too pleased if you didn't prioritize the kids there either
To:peanutspersonally
It was quite the bumpy ride
Jul 15, 2025
Gideon should've just gone for the gold and stolen what Kazuma would've stolen😂 Roze would probably get upset though lol Maybe she'll be as good as him at Time magic someday
Jul 14, 2025
Unironically peak Even with the kinda over the top raunchiness, I'd say this a solid contender for the contest Can really tell your writing has improved
Jul 07, 2025
Thanks for coming by! This novel didn't do well in the contest, but I still appreciate any new readers that visit
May 18, 2025
Poor Mio just wants to catch a break But it was a cute first chapter, that read really nicely with its prose
May 07, 2025
To:Steward McOy
Thanks for reading
May 01, 2025
Oh yeah, good catch. I'll fix it up now
Apr 20, 2025
Oh yeah, the story sorta drip feeds the cultural differences between both worlds as the story goes on. I kind of want the novel to touch on the topic of economics too since that's my jam Kamen Rider? I know about it, but the main thing that comes to mind for me is One Piece when I think of mirror worlds 😄
Apr 17, 2025
Geez that's a lot of em dashes lol. And the jumping from different character to character was a little jarring for an opening chapter But overall I like the prose. Feels really refined, crisp. And right down the middle to avoid purple prose or white room syndrome I'll check out more of the story if I have time
Apr 16, 2025
To:NaN
Oh yeah no problem. Particularly, I'm a big fan of the zombie genre, but any post-apocalyptic setting is fine too haha Gabe sounds like he has a lot on his plate. In regard to the local AI on his phone though, I did suspect that might be the case. But with today's tech, modern cell phones shouldn't have nearly enough processing power to run an AI locally. Most AI's function through cloud services where a server handles the workload. However, I gotta acknowledge this story takes place in the 2040's. Maybe cell phones are just much more powerful in this world by then. So it's not hard to suspend my disbelief I'm reminded when I had a beta reader get ultra nitpicky on me when he read that I put a restroom in a local Japanese train since those don't usually have restrooms. But in my head I'm thinking -- this is an alternative, totalitarian Japan one hundred years in the future, and you can't suspend your disbelief enough to imagine they might have slightly different trains by then? So that's to say I am nitpicky, but not as much as some of these other guys 😆I'm mostly just the dude at parties with lots of useless trivia lol