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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Or find me on the Honeyfeed Discord Currently writing GLINT. Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Oct 06, 2023
To:Xiellion
Ah, well this is sort of an alternate version I made just for the contest, but I'm happy some of the cuteness still came through
Sep 25, 2023
Probably one of the horniest entries in the contest, but that's not a bad thing 😆 Had lots of fun reading, especially comparing Kwan to Perci from Gentleman of the Apocalypse. They're two pretty polar opposite characters but the juxtaposition between them was always cool No real complaints either, except maybe just not being very clear when something is narration or an inner thought. Mixing some past and present tense too. But overall yeah, great ride. Suvi's storyline was particularly engaging since I have a similar character in my GiG novel If there's ever a sequel, I do hope Suvi returns to flesh herself out a little more Grats on completing your novel and wish you all the best in the future
Yee, I guess Daichi was just channeling his inner Kwan, and trying hard to control his own Kwan Jr. 😆
Sep 20, 2023
To:Momentie
I meant realistic in regards to like the politics and economics but yeah lol. Hard to keep things realistic in a world full of fantasy elements 😆 And crows can live for a long time actually compared to other birds, and since Paradise only lasts five years, I think he'll be fine
Sep 19, 2023
Nope. But she's on the cover because the novel is literally named after her 😆 So not really redundant for her to be on the cover. Last time we saw her was in Hanako's flashback. Dominion would be more important later on in the story.
He's just a crow lol
Sep 18, 2023
Yeah there's just two wholesome and zero wholesomeness in this chapter 😅 Just went and checked again, there's just more in the comment section now lol It'll be used less often from here though I think
Kwan channeling more of his inner Perci I see, being quite the gentleman and not taking advantage of drunken women Pretty cute chapter though. Headpats are always nice!
Woah, that was probably my fave chapter so far Some good action and then character development for Annika I don't think Kwan would take advantage of a drunk woman though? Guess we'll see though
I think the Ctrl+F picked up an extra wholesome from the comments since it was just twice in this chapter 😆 But yeah, I just think it's a fun word to use occasionally
Yeah, I try to be realistic with the world, taking into account stuff like economics and politics when I can Helps keep things more interesting I think
Sep 16, 2023
I think cutely is only used once this chapter, but I'll change it up in other chapters if it's too reoccurring
Sep 13, 2023
Lol maybe, thanks for reading thoroughly enough to notice something like that I think everyone has some pet words they use more than other authors though
He was something of a celebrity before, for not the usual reasons, but it's a spoiler to mention details at this point 😅
Oh and there's also a little typo on the (I have to stop he-") line where there's a random quotation mark at the end But guess you can't really fix that now 😅
If there's ever a sequel, I do hope Suvi returns to flesh herself out a little more
