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Currently writing "Reincarnated as a Background Character".

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Sep 20, 2023

To:Momentie

I meant realistic in regards to like the politics and economics but yeah lol. Hard to keep things realistic in a world full of fantasy elements 😆
And crows can live for a long time actually compared to other birds, and since Paradise only lasts five years, I think he'll be fine

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:36

Sep 19, 2023

To:Momentie

Nope. But she's on the cover because the novel is literally named after her 😆 So not really redundant for her to be on the cover.
Last time we saw her was in Hanako's flashback. Dominion would be more important later on in the story.

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:35

Sep 19, 2023

To:Momentie

He's just a crow lol

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:36

Sep 18, 2023

To:Momentie

Yeah there's just two wholesome and zero wholesomeness in this chapter 😅 Just went and checked again, there's just more in the comment section now lol
It'll be used less often from here though I think

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:30

Sep 18, 2023

Kwan channeling more of his inner Perci I see, being quite the gentleman and not taking advantage of drunken women
Pretty cute chapter though. Headpats are always nice!

Annika Says No!

Chapter:29

Sep 18, 2023

Woah, that was probably my fave chapter so far Some good action and then character development for Annika
I don't think Kwan would take advantage of a drunk woman though? Guess we'll see though

Annika Says No!

Chapter:28

Sep 18, 2023

To:Momentie

I think the Ctrl+F picked up an extra wholesome from the comments since it was just twice in this chapter 😆 But yeah, I just think it's a fun word to use occasionally

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:30

Sep 18, 2023

To:Momentie

Yeah, I try to be realistic with the world, taking into account stuff like economics and politics when I can Helps keep things more interesting I think

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:33

Sep 16, 2023

To:Xiellion

I think cutely is only used once this chapter, but I'll change it up in other chapters if it's too reoccurring

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:30

Sep 13, 2023

To:Momentie

Lol maybe, thanks for reading thoroughly enough to notice something like that
I think everyone has some pet words they use more than other authors though

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:26

Sep 13, 2023

To:Momentie

He was something of a celebrity before, for not the usual reasons, but it's a spoiler to mention details at this point 😅

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:25

Sep 13, 2023

Oh and there's also a little typo on the (I have to stop he-") line where there's a random quotation mark at the end
But guess you can't really fix that now 😅

Annika Says No!

Chapter:27

Sep 13, 2023

Bruhhh that's amazing! Referencing some pals as beverages in the chapter 😆
Was a bit spooked but in the good way lol
Love fourth wall breaks like that. I did something similar with GiG back in the day but I think peeps got the wrong idea 😅
Anyways yeah, Suvi is proving to be a thorn in Kwan's side. And she has an entire bar under her control! She's proving a formidable foe and also a formidable seductress

Annika Says No!

Chapter:27

Sep 12, 2023

Bruv great minds think alike, we have a same chapter title 😆
Professor Juni do be alluring though without her even trying that much lol

Annika Says No!

Chapter:26

Sep 11, 2023

To:Momentie

It's the climax of the volume, not of the whole story
I didn't want a montage because everything that happens here is important for the narrative and for the character arcs
This and the next chapter set up the rest of the story

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:23

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