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Currently writing "Reincarnated as a Background Character".

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Oct 30, 2023

Neat. I liked how it how it references the original novel a lot. Good imagery too. I feel like there's some symbolism I'm missing but forgive me since it's late haha
Also I saw "fate" in there and I just gotta assume that's an FGO reference 😆

Moonlit Dance

Chapter:1

Oct 08, 2023

To:Xiellion

Thanks for the detailed feedback! Yeah, I could have probably written this last arc different but kind of had to go in this direction 😅
But I'm glad it seems you enjoyed everything else
I'll improve future iterations of the story for sure

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:39

Oct 06, 2023

To:Xiellion

Ah, well this is sort of an alternate version I made just for the contest, but I'm happy some of the cuteness still came through

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:36

Sep 25, 2023

Probably one of the horniest entries in the contest, but that's not a bad thing 😆
Had lots of fun reading, especially comparing Kwan to Perci from Gentleman of the Apocalypse. They're two pretty polar opposite characters but the juxtaposition between them was always cool
No real complaints either, except maybe just not being very clear when something is narration or an inner thought. Mixing some past and present tense too.
But overall yeah, great ride. Suvi's storyline was particularly engaging since I have a similar character in my GiG novel If there's ever a sequel, I do hope Suvi returns to flesh herself out a little more
Grats on completing your novel and wish you all the best in the future

Annika Says No!

Chapter:30

Sep 25, 2023

To:Xiellion

Yee, I guess Daichi was just channeling his inner Kwan, and trying hard to control his own Kwan Jr. 😆

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:32

Sep 20, 2023

To:Momentie

I meant realistic in regards to like the politics and economics but yeah lol. Hard to keep things realistic in a world full of fantasy elements 😆
And crows can live for a long time actually compared to other birds, and since Paradise only lasts five years, I think he'll be fine

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:36

Sep 19, 2023

To:Momentie

Nope. But she's on the cover because the novel is literally named after her 😆 So not really redundant for her to be on the cover.
Last time we saw her was in Hanako's flashback. Dominion would be more important later on in the story.

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:35

Sep 19, 2023

To:Momentie

He's just a crow lol

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:36

Sep 18, 2023

To:Momentie

Yeah there's just two wholesome and zero wholesomeness in this chapter 😅 Just went and checked again, there's just more in the comment section now lol
It'll be used less often from here though I think

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:30

Sep 18, 2023

Kwan channeling more of his inner Perci I see, being quite the gentleman and not taking advantage of drunken women
Pretty cute chapter though. Headpats are always nice!

Annika Says No!

Chapter:29

Sep 18, 2023

Woah, that was probably my fave chapter so far Some good action and then character development for Annika
I don't think Kwan would take advantage of a drunk woman though? Guess we'll see though

Annika Says No!

Chapter:28

Sep 18, 2023

To:Momentie

I think the Ctrl+F picked up an extra wholesome from the comments since it was just twice in this chapter 😆 But yeah, I just think it's a fun word to use occasionally

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:30

Sep 18, 2023

To:Momentie

Yeah, I try to be realistic with the world, taking into account stuff like economics and politics when I can Helps keep things more interesting I think

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:33

Sep 16, 2023

To:Xiellion

I think cutely is only used once this chapter, but I'll change it up in other chapters if it's too reoccurring

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:30

Sep 13, 2023

To:Momentie

Lol maybe, thanks for reading thoroughly enough to notice something like that
I think everyone has some pet words they use more than other authors though

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:26

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