Sep 05, 2022
To:HVM
Thanks for the comment and showing me what the story was lacking.
Personally, I thought about writing another arc later this year and I planed for it to deeply investigate the rest of the cast such as the royal family, gods, saintess and so on.
Over all, thanks for your insight, I'm always happy with some kind of feedback which can help me write better characters and if you have something you would like to add to the characters, please write it so I can reflect on it
Thanks, TR