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Sep 02, 2025
To:Erwin.W
ofc the cockehead thinks about porn first 😎
also, k and s? king of fighters. killer instinct(s)? i can't think about anyone else. as for characters like... i can't name one
To:kazesenken
Haha, you'll see Kaze, you'll see.
Sep 01, 2025
To:obliviousbushtit
Yes, and no? A lot of stories I've read have them be either hikkokomoris with no discernible skills, or have their backgrounds mainly be fluff (so, just to add a bit of context to how they die). Esp something like a degree coming into play is quite rare.
Honestly, I appreciate that, because I hate them too, haha. Also nice Matrix reference here.
A stat screen? I'd almost forgotten about their existence
Damn... This is peak
Ok i like Martha quite a bit. She's just the exact shade of has to compromise for the good of everyone that I like. This whole thing is turning great
A protag's background actually affecting or benefiting their next life? Very neat
The Japanese Dream? I wonder what irl parallel this is meant to be compared to haha
Nyaniiii. What happens next
Yeah, tbh, it is very popular in LN's, haha. But I'm also picky around those, so hence why I did say it's personal preference too. I think the balance you're going for currently is good though, if that's of any use.
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I think the start felt faster compared to how it is currently. I think the scene changes in the Prologue sorta contribute to that, but I think there's also a general vibe of 'trying to get to the point of the novel', which is something a lot of stories do.
That said, this could be personal preference speaking since I usually like it when they take a bit more time.
This might be personal opinion, but I do feel there's a gradual tone shift from the prologue of the story to it currently, which feels more casual, and less 'dangerous', in a sense, which is interesting. Though I think the pacing has definitely improved since the start and I'm curious to see how the novel develops everything.
To:Earlo_18
Gaspard gonna get his dream come true???!!